Happiness and success are goals that humans have worked at since our creation. Everything we do has something relates to our quest for happiness. Even things we don't enjoy, like work and school, are done in hopes of achieving financial success, which is supposed to contribute to our happiness. I firmly believe that we wouldn't do something, no matter if it's good or bad, if we didn't believe that it would have some kind of positive effect on us. That's just our nature as humans. We sin because we will have the positive benefit of temporary pleasure. We go on a missionary journey because we will get the pleasure of helping others, and the satisfaction that we are using our lives for God. Success is different to many people, but happiness is simply the good feeling that we all hope, and try, to find.
To me, the definition of success is having a goal and achieving it.
Many people only think of success in terms of finances, but most people try to be successful in many different matters. Most people, including me, would think that a man who, despite being poor and having a bad job, raises great children, loves his wife, and is respected by those who know him would be successful. Ebenezer Scrooge, the main character in A Christmas Carol would not. His idea of success is working hard, becoming rich, and getting as much money as possible. However, we see that this success does not make him happy. Success leads to happiness, but you must be successful in all areas of your life to be happy. I would consider being rich to be physical happiness, a loving family to be emotional happiness, and being right with God to be spiritual happiness.
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It's good
No, actually it is very good
the only bad points I see are:
1) using "I"--it is said that "I" & "You" should not be used in professional writing,
2) using opinion-phrases like "To me, etc"--in writing using those type of phrases is unnecessary because almost any kind of essay has your opinion in it and writing "To me, I firmly believe, etc" you are drawing attention to it and risking some people turning away your essay because they might be a little narrow-minded,
3) Saying unnecessary transition words like "In conclusion," and the lack of transition words--try to use them more often because they make paragraphs flow smoothly
4) using "This" at the beginning of a sentence--makes the essay look "un-professional" or "un-polished"--a suggestion would be to use "it" or restating from the before sentence and continuing.
Otherwise, the essay is quite excellent. ^_^
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