If I met you in the street, would you smile?
If I met you in a club, would you ask me to dance?
If met you in a restaurant, would you ask me to leave with you?
If I held your hand in the street, would you turn away?
If I kissed you in the park, would you kiss me back?
If I opened the door for you, would you walk through it?
If I said, "I do", would you?
If I carried your child, would you still love me?
If I had our child, would you hold my hand?
If I said, "I love you", would you say it back?
If I cried, would you hear?
If when they closed your coffin, and I said goodbye, would you do the same?
If I prayed at night for you, would you respond?
If I died, would you be waiting for me?
If I lived, would you be looking down at me?
If I told our children the story of how we met, would you smile?
If I asked you to bring me back to our teenage years of holding hands in the street and kissing in the park, would you?
If I bid the world goodbye, would we be together once more?
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Pretty Good...
I recognized some spelling and gramatical errors in the poem (for example in the third question, you missed an "I", and leave is spelled live...). But anyway, that doesn't destroy the poem at all. I think it's a great piece of work, and I especially like the last two questions, they put me into some really tough thinking.
Good work!
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