INSECTS

Although the essay is fine but you should also include the classification of insects. Without the classification, it seems incomplete.

Ok, same comments as the SNAKE deal. It appears that an encyclopedia was opened and the some interesting facts pulled at random and then typed up in some kind of order.


And fleetofeet...you guys got to know each other...as you jumped in immediately to rate this author again. And with such sophisticated babble in an attempt to glorify substandard work! cmon...real comments or none at all!

Overall the essay was well written, but if the author wants to make the paper more credible and scientific he/she should have used scientific names.


I mean instead of calling all the insects "creatures" use their scientific names. Doing this would be more professional and probably receive a better grade.


Also, having sources to back up the definitions and descriptions of each insect would give the paper more credibility.

I liked how it was simple and easy to understand yet it had good information in the shortness of it

However elementary this essay is as a whole, I honestly didn't know about the butterfly damage thing, which in turn maed the read worthwhile.


It should probably be noted that the world of insects is a world of engineering improbability.


Worth investigating as an aside to the existing central theme might be the vision of a fly, the areodynamics of the bumblebee and the dragonfly, or any of the other many miraculous adaptations of insects to their own environ which might be applicable to the human order of existence.


Good job, author, now it's time for a student rewrite with detailed elaboration.