JULIUS CAESAR

Essay by buttface24Elementary School, 4th gradeF, October 2013

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Concealed Comfort

Snow, is like my comforter, it comforts me from my worries, Comment by sheenreni: Simile 1

Its flakes, are like the thoughts in our minds, Comment by sheenreni: Simile 2

I can't hear them, but I know they are there, Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with hair and pair 1

And the feeling, I get when the flakes get on my hair, Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with there and pair 1

Reminds me, that everyone is unique, there is not an exact pair. Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with there and hair 1

My life, it is like a piece of clay, Comment by sheenreni: Simile 3 Comment by sheenreni: Repetition (MY) 1 Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with day 2

My parents, they help mold it every day, Comment by sheenreni: Repetition (MY) 1 Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with clay 2

My comforts, are molded along, Comment by sheenreni: Repetition (MY) 1 Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with song 3

Especially, when my life is a long cold song.

Comment by sheenreni: Metaphor 1 Comment by sheenreni: Assonance 1Vowel O Comment by sheenreni: Rhymes with Along 3

My family, they comfort my fall,

As we are, a contributive connected chain of costly copper, Comment by sheenreni: Metaphor 2 Comment by sheenreni: Repetition of We 2 Comment by sheenreni: Alliteration 1 and Assonance 2 with Contributive, Connected, Costly, and Copper

We support, every small link, Comment by sheenreni: Repetition of We 2 Comment by sheenreni: Rhyme 4 Rhymes with exhort Comment by sheenreni: Rhyme 5 Rhymes with prink

We exhort, each other to prink. Comment by sheenreni: Repetition of We 2 Comment by sheenreni: Rhyme 4 Rhymes with support Comment by sheenreni: Rhyme 5 Rhymes with link

Theme: Comfort is all around us.

We usually tend to ignore them, especially when...