"Time to get up!"
"Okay!" I answer back, while rolling out of bed, and standing up. I look at myself in the mirror a girl who has wavy, curly brown hair looking back. I have blue eyes, the colour of faded dark denim. I sighed. 'Yep, that's me' I thought. I sighed again, and got ready for school.
My name is Adriana McPherson. I am 15ý years old. I live with my mum, dad, and my two older brothers. I am in Year 10 at Angel's Catholic Secondary School, a co-ed school in which Years 9-12 attend. I am pretty good at school, with an A average.
As I was eating breakfast I thought about my friends. I have a close group of friends, but if I had to say who my best friend is, I couldn't choose. All of my friends are different. There is Isabelle "Bella" Smith, who I am close too.
We are similar in many ways, we have the same sense of humour, and we understand each other. With her, I can talk about school and books without feeling weird.
Then there is Jessica "Jess" Mills. We get along well, but, at the same time, we are opposites. I am theory, she is practical. Another close friend of mine is Kiara "Kia" Fulton. Kia and I get along well; she's a joker, and brings out the more playful side in me. Kia either has a new boyfriend or crush each week. Last, but definitely not least, is Alexandra "Alyx" Ledger. Alyx is the one who, like me, is addicted to television and movies, but, more importantly, the guys in television and movies. These four people I can call my friends without a second thought. But, then there's Tiana.
Tiana and I have...
Nice and practical
You state everything so bluntly and to the point. I like that! You make the essay fairly short and easy to understand. Many people cannot do that because they have a habit of over-explaining a point.
VERY GOOD JOB! :)
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