The novel's protagonist, the twelve-year-old English boy who is elected the leader of the group of boys stranded on the island. He is a very good leader who turns out to go from civilization to savages. In this piece of document, it describes how Ralph behaves and his personalities. All the information was gathered directly from the book ÃÂLord Of The FliesÃÂ.
First off all, this piece of document is a diary, a diary that Ralph received on his birthday, the day before he departed to the field trip, which resulted in the plan crash. This diary consists of information that has been written by Ralph, it only has one diary entry that explains all the personal information about Ralph. I described Ralph as Impulsive, because on pg. 37 ÃÂ We must make a fireÃÂ states that he is doing things without thinking about it. He decided to make the fire without thinking it over.
I described him as Controlling, ÃÂWeÃÂll haveÃÂ rulesÃÂ, this quote states that he is controlling because he wanted to make rules and laws right away, this quote is found on pg. 31 and an example of a rule made would be the rule about the conch. He is not trustworthy, when piggy told him not to tell anyone about his name ÃÂPiggyÃÂ, Ralph went on and told people, a quote that backs this statement is ÃÂYou toldÃÂ said piggyÃÂ on pg. 21. Ralph is Optimistic, ÃÂThis is our island, ÃÂ funÃÂ on pg. 33 shows how he thinks that they can have fun without the grown ups.
Ralph is attractive also, as I stated from the quote from pg. 19 ÃÂthere was a stillness about Ralph as he sat down that marked him out: there was size, and attractive appearance.ÃÂ He was very attracting and fit, therefore that was one reason why he was a good leader for the civilization side. Ralph is a very motivational type of character ÃÂWhile weÃÂre ÃÂ time.ÃÂ On pg. 33, states that he is motivating little kids into doing something they never thought of doing. He is also very inconsiderate; he participated in taking piggyÃÂs glasses.
I made sure to acknowledge every point and details from these quotes and I exposed it as a diary, which was written by Ralph. I made Ralph him self tell the reader about him self. Since the diary was written in the 1940s, I made it look very old because it is being read at 2008. It has been along time therefore the diary looks really old. The text in the diary is also fixed to suit a 12 year olds writing standards.
Bad essay!
This essay is very bad and is full of spelling and grammatical errors.
The first sentence is a sentence fragment.
The following words do not need to be capitalized in the second paragraph:
-Impulsive
-Controlling
-Optimistic
You forgot to capitalize "piggy" at the end of the third paragraph. Remember, someone's name is a proper noun and therefore, should always be capitalized.
In the third paragraph, there are also some errors:
-"him self" should be "himself"
-"along time" should be "a long time"
-"12 year olds" should be "12-year-old's"
This essay does not meet grade 10 criteria, and I don't believe that you got an A+ on it.
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