Multiculturalism in the US

It started out very slow. The author seemed confused and unsure of the grammer. It picked up in the middle with several coherent paragraphs and then slipped back into the original confusion at the end.

I was not done with the last comment and the site simply submitted it as I was typing

The author seemed to be trying to defend an assumption "white people are racist" without providing even anecdotal evidence. The subject matter is valid and the author's opinion is very common.

I'd say the author is just learning to express themself in print.

Not bad

As i was reading, i thought this is a very good essay, but then when i got to the part of "White people are starting to understand"... i thought you were starting to attack the white people. I'm sure u didn't mean to do that, but when u bring that up you need to elaborate and proved more information. But overall essay is VERY WELL written.

its a good essay, i'd have to say, but most of it is based on opinion. It could be improved with more factual data and more research. merely stating an opinion does not qualify it as a proper essay. and using "white people" is a somewhat political incorrect term. maybe "caucasian" would be more appropriate...overall, good opinions, and well stated

I liked your essey, but i didnt understand your stance on the subject. Is it just a definition on what an american is?

this essay is objective and clear. It makes a good point which hints on how multiculturalism is viewed in the us. good essay.

I find that the begining was slow but it slowly picked up. The point that the States is multicultural is not totally accurate. I also do not find this persuasive enough. Well written though.

could use a little more work..otherwise...it was pretty good

very well written, very good view

Not much of an attention getter in the intro, but overall does a good job of describing how different cultural groups make up America. Also makes a good point at the end people need to accept those of other cultures to increase the unity between Americans.

not bag its actualy good

Have you considered immrigation and refugees? They also make a big part of this country

Good essay, with well balanced structure and paragraphing. Good bibliography at the end.

THE PAPER STARTED OUT A LITTLE VAUGE, BUT SLOWLY THE AUTHOR ADDED SUBSTANCE TO IT. THE END SEEMED A LITTLE STRAINED THOUGH

pretty interesting topic, written well (average), and is clear and consice (is that how ya spell it?)

It was a little confusing. After finishing I felt that you left out some details and that you should of extended your writing.

a little off. Needs to be more descriptive.