Do you know how pain stacking it is to fight a giant marlin for 3 straight days? Santiago was such an amazing character to fight through all his challenges that erupted. Santiago is was so incredible in the way that he lived through thick and thin. Santiago was so incredible that his whole life was based on fishing.
Santiago was so amazing with all his troubles. When he started out on his journey in the ocean he was all alone and he was counting on this catch to live on. Santiago went through so many hardships and one of them was that he was out there for so long. Another thing that Santiago went through was that the pain of the rope burns on his back. He had many troubles that he went through and was near death. He had to hold on for days and with his hand cramping up and the rope burns he stood through it all even when it looked bad and for him to make it through his mild heart attack and finally he had to row back to the bay.
The Old Man and the Sea
English: Hemingway posing for a dust jacket photo ...
Grave markers of Ernest Hemingway & wife.JPGHe also had to eat raw fish with no salt or lime to eat it with.
There were a lot of other troubles thick and thin. Santiago was a very talented and experienced friend and fisherman. Santiago was not only a friend to those around him but he was also one of the best companions to the little boy. The way that he would talk to the boy and tell his stories were very interesting. Some more thick things he went through was that on his way home the fish, his brother was attacked by the sharks. Santiago is an extremely powerful character that went through a lot of interesting adventures. He was also...
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Let's see...you need a better closing sentence for this awesome character as you say...a more punchy sentence such as 'I only wish we would take an example of santiago's persistence and keep as well doing our best and not giving up in our own lives' or something like that...make a parallelization with ur life from what u learned from the book
Also, refrain from using one word all the time...santiago (the character's name) was used an awfully lot of times...you can use also "the protagonist" "the hero of the story" "the main character" it's a bad tactic to repeat a word constantly...in a speech it's heard as boring and repetitive.
Also needs more elaboration because it's a big novel, but nevertheless...it's not bad at all for 1st yr of high school...it's nice.
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