Personal poem I wrote about jealousy...maybe you all can relate

Very powerful and something everyone can relate to as well as connect with. Awesome work. :)

Good, liked it. It sounded like a rap. I think it was the rhythm of it. Maybe you can sell it to a rapstar and makes lots of money... hehehe.


Because I hate writing poetry I am very impressed and will award you with 10/10 for your efforts.

I enjoyed this poem because you used an easy structure, and none of the words were vague. The phrases hold deep meanings. However, it sounded more like a rap song than a poem,when I read it aloud! That's not a bad thing, actually, it made it more enjoyable! Good Job!

i really ejoyed this poem particuallary the style in which is wrote. The author should realy focus on this talent of theirs and strive to be the best they can be in this field

I thought this poem was very original and overal, i give it a 8.5/10.

I enjoyed your poem because i feel that many people can relate to it. However, at times i felt it was more of a 'rap' then a personal insight. The rhythm of the poem was balanced and consistent throughout the entire poem. Overall, a good effort :)