"They say love is a form of magick,
and I must say my love, you cast your spell well,"
My eyes alight with the moons erie glow,
I place my hands upon a gravestone close to me,
I close my eyes and imagine my sad life passing by ever so slow,
After a moment, I slowly open my eyes and begin to see,
My eyes open wider as I see you standing before me,
Standing silently, looking towards me in a lace black dress,
Your eyes shimmering bright in the moonlight, a light I will forever see,
You reach your hand out to me, touching my face, a soft caress,
Your long, beautiful hair flowing within the rays of the moon,
Radient like blood red roses in a gothic moonlight,
My imagination begins to wonder, thinking of our embrace, hoping it is soon,
Knowing that if we were together everything would be right,
If there was such a thing as perfection, it would be you,
Gods stand in line just for a glimse of your beautiful face,
Impulse, I take a step closer, one step closer to you,
Just to be near you, I would give you gifts of silk, leather and lace,
Our eyes locked in a gaze of a longing for love,
Your gaze burns deep into my soul like fire,
As I stare deeply into your eyes I can see the shimmering stars from above,
I'd move planets away just to bring us higher,
I take your hand, and we walk farther past the tombstones,
Deeper into the night we walk,
Faintly I hear the sound of deathlike moans,
The sound fades as we talk,
A tall oak tree stands before us as a guardian of the night,
The silvery moonlight deeply shadows the tree,
I get...
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i like how you've put something so beautiful, the love of 2 people, in such a dark setting. the contrast is great, love in a graveyard.. your use of description give the reader great mental images, i personally would love to be the girl in your poem, it's eerily beautiful.
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