Poem about Seeing Two Small Kids Get Mauled by a Dog

Freaky.... but good.

A great poem - despite the awfulness of the events described, I really enjoyed reading this.

Fantastic work.

Your poem is both morbid and very interesting. Great use of literary devices.Metaphors,similies. Good job.

The detail here is apalling to read as it must have been to watch. I particularly like the way the pace picks up when you describe the attack, then slows in the last three lines

that was really good, you have talent keep on writing.

Nice. You have made the dog into a wild beast that doesnt rest until it has quenched his thrist for blood. You also have the ability to create clear pictures of the story for the reader's mind. Keep up the work!

This must have been a rather haunting memory, i think its great that u found a creative outlet for it. and your so good at it too.

Well, this was an actual occurence and believe it or not there is a lot of bloodshed when there is a vicious rotweiler on the loose. I stood there in shock, watching all of this unfold. I was fourteen at the time and I even had an apprearence on the news as a witness. If the description is "too gory" for you, imagine what it was like to actually be there.

I wonder... interesting poem. Did you really see this happen? Or is this just a product of your vivid imagination....?

wow, hmmm...and u actually saw everything, the hairs on the back of my head stands...good use of words describing this horrid experience.

too gory