Writing Exercises

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Writing Exercises

David A. Keith

BUS340: Business Communications

Instructor Ellie Parvin

September 12, 2014

5.3 Audience Relationship Emphasize the Positive

Your payment has been accepted and your credit ratings are outstanding!

The return for your merchandise is shipped to you and on its way.

Your shipment for those baby cry dolls is being processed and will be delivered to you in 3 to 5 business days.

You placed an order with us and we were able to find the color of the blouse you asked for.

We are so sorry your waterbed you order caused water damage because of lack of heat. We will send you a replacement waterbed with no additional charge, and all you have to do is pay the cost for shipping.

5.5 Audience Relationship: Bias-Free Language

Maggie definitely is an extrovert.

His job performance is superb.

One of a pilot's jobs is to remand calm under any type of pressure, and be will to deal with different problem when they come.

Renata Parson is a good candidate to choose for this debate.

After all these years Sam Nugent is still active in sales.

5.10 Message Composition: Selecting Words

Dave is able to work well in his new general manager job since he has a diverse background.

Leslie was considered unskillful for working effectively in the accounting office.

The entire department was victims because they missed the deadline.

I would love to help you out with that project but I have so much work to do.

Our consumer products for the commercial space are being affected.

5.18 Message Organization: Transitional Elements

Steve Case was determined to turn his vision into reality when he saw the continuous possibilities in online businesses. He wanted to build a simple Internet service for ordinary people but his associates' frond at his...