Your Wife is Not Your Slave

i like the first person view, gives a more effect, like if its coming from the actually person, good job.

a well written piece of work... keep up d good work

This is perhaps your best poem. It was very powerful and spoke to me. It is amazing how intense emotion, and the whole situation can be captured in so few words. I wouldn't change this poem at all. It is perfect. It sounds so real.

This is an excellent piece of work! It really hit home for me and I was very moved by it. You did a wonderful job!

Oh this was simply great! Your expression, metaphors, emotions. They were all fantastic and well portrayed. Very good job.

You've done an awesome job writing this poem! It was an intense and creative poem that basically left me speechless. Well Done!

I enjoyed reading this poem. It is very intense and really captures the audience. I also, while reading it could imagine it as being song lyrics. A very good piece.

xwow..u gripped me..i want more!

Well, it was a good.... poem, essay whatever. Makes you wish there was more............

It was a good poem.

I can feel the emotions of the poem an did was written vin such a manner that I felt as though I was the enslaved wife. Well Done.