A very good paper indeed. The whole describtion of the political affairs that make this essay are very well expressed and need no reviewing. Nevertheless, u should try to improve the organzation and punctuation throughout the essay. Well done!!
- 29/12/2003
- 14:31:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While there is room for improvement in this paper grammar wise, especially employing conjunctions; and fundamentally wise also by the information provided which could go further in depth. But for a seventh grader this is an excellent paper. Anyhow, a very good effort and keep it up!! Congratulations!!
- 29/12/2003
- 08:47:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
While there is room for improvement in this paper grammar wise, especially employing conjunctions; and fundamentally wise also by the information provided which could go further in depth. But for a seventh grader this is an excellent paper. Anyhow, a very good effort and keep it up!! Congratulations!!
- 29/12/2003
- 08:45:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay, indeed. Your analizis was spectacular in every point of view, although, if i had to improve somting, i would say that u should emphasize more in the organization and the layout of your work. Well done!!
- 28/12/2003
- 21:03:55
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay in every point of view. Well done. Keep the good work up!! A very good analysis of the subject specified at the beginning. My most sencere congratulations!!
- 22/12/2003
- 13:36:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay considering every subject analyed. Well done, dude!!! Congratulations.
- 17/12/2003
- 19:49:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very good example of what a good analysis should look like!! Very good indeed!!!
- 05/12/2003
- 09:45:13
- Score: 15 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
The explanation of the movie was good and effective, although the essay was a bit chort. However, very well done!!
- 04/12/2003
- 16:23:52
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
A nice explanation of society and the way human beings live like is clearly explained throughout the essay. Verty clear and comprehensive!!
- 03/12/2003
- 15:43:29
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The analysis and the review of the play Delany Sister is quite good and it is a perfect example of what an analysis should look like. Excellent piece of work.
- 02/12/2003
- 18:23:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A reflective story and quite mature, indeed. Made me realize certain thing i wasn´t aware of.
- 30/11/2003
- 21:42:00
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think this essay is a very good explanation of the catstrophic world we live in. For this, I would like to say thank you to the man that wrote this essay, because with it, many people can realize how are children explited worldwide.
- 30/11/2003
- 20:15:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.