This topic has always caught my attention, but there aren't many essays on it. How did you pick your topic. You did a very good job catching the readers attention, and you kept in thruogh your writing style. I can honestly say that I enjoyed your essay.
- 23/11/2003
- 03:26:34
- Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
Good job. You could have elaborated on how and why people predict horoscopes. There were a few gramatical errors. In the words of Mr. Edie, my english 4A teacher, "I am a comma Nazi" and saw very few mistakes. Great job overall. Keep up the good work.
- 23/11/2003
- 03:22:17
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Hey, I really did like the topic and the way you presented your information. It made me think about it real hard and quite a while after I read it. Great opinion. Keep it up.
- 23/11/2003
- 03:17:46
- Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
It was only first year... It's for when the chemistry does expect all that much out of you...
- 22/11/2003
- 15:42:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an excelent paper. I'm really surprised by it. The only problem i found was that you used the word 'dumbfounded' twice in the same paragraph (para 1). I don't think that this was necessary. over all it was a great paper
- 19/11/2003
- 22:53:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really do like your instructions. im really bad with instructions, and i got it down in like 4 tries. and it was soooooo good. you were right, it was worth the money.
- 18/11/2003
- 17:56:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
the topic of abortion has been used so many times in the past. If you are going to do this topic, you should make it a hell of a lot longer.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:41:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your paper is very well written, and is owed praise by antone who is able to read...well, that's going a little to far, but i really liked it. keep it up.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:33:46
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
This has always been an intriguing topic to me, but there are so many other things you could have inserted into this essay.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:29:05
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
oh, honey. I'm glad somebody can speak out the way you did.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:27:36
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I love your poetry, i wish i could do it like you. but you do need to work on certain parts.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:20:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i already read this one, here
- 02/11/2003
- 13:16:04
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
that would belong on a joke sight, not here. Seriously, why.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:14:09
- Score: 0 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Just because it may have gotten 100% in a irrelevant class, doesn't mean that should be the grade. just think about it a little.thanks
- 02/11/2003
- 13:11:58
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really liked the way you explained the room one by one, and didn't lump them all together. But it does have trouble keeping the readers attention. otherwise, good job.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:09:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really like the way you used repetition when you talk about how each drug releases dopamine. It gets the pjoint across very well.
- 02/11/2003
- 13:01:01
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
it\'s not bad, but some arguements need some work
- 02/11/2003
- 12:59:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
That has got to be one of the best essays i have ever read about drugs.
- 02/11/2003
- 12:48:32
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.