There was a few spelling errors but that dosn't matter. You knew the topic well, anaylized and organized wonderfully. It was very informative.
- 26/11/2004
- 16:59:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good but too short you can't make an in depth comparison in under 200 words
- 14/08/2004
- 22:18:57
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Its good to write what's on your mind, express your emotions and clear your head. I feel for you. From your writing I can tell you were close. Did you actually send your friend a letter?
- 14/08/2004
- 21:26:54
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I don't have much to say, you said it all. I've witnessed the pretend to religious routine myself. It is hard to put up with. This was well written and presented. I'm glad you shared your story.
- 14/08/2004
- 21:04:52
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is perhaps your best poem. It was very powerful and spoke to me. It is amazing how intense emotion, and the whole situation can be captured in so few words. I wouldn't change this poem at all. It is perfect. It sounds so real.
- 14/08/2004
- 21:01:03
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
How many people actually take the time to read comments people have written before they rate them? No offense to jellenko, but is Wow, this i worth any points at all? It is not helpful to the author nor does it talk about the story. It is all together useless.
- 14/08/2004
- 20:55:51
- Score: 13 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
Delivered well, I wish it were longer. Though the message in this poem will never be heeded by most of the population it is could for people to speak for such a society. I agree with you. We can always hope.
- 14/08/2004
- 20:49:13
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I have read many of your poems and am wondering where this deep depressing tone comes from. Are these life experiences or just ideas? Either way you have a unique way of delivering them that should be appreciated.
- 14/08/2004
- 20:44:42
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I thought the poem was roughly written. It needs to be polished. I appreciate the gloomy style but it could have been better presented. As coulove wrote though, it does make you think.
- 14/08/2004
- 20:41:29
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very good paper- to make it a higher level paper details will need to be added. This is a great start! I have studied the subject and know what the formula was but it is always safe to explain what you are talking about for those who don't.
- 05/06/2004
- 12:10:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with what you wrote. But there are ways to inforce physical punishment with control. It dosn't mean the parent is abusive.
- 03/05/2004
- 11:46:37
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well I can't say I like Kobe and I can't say I don't. That is I watch basketball 50 percent of the time. Your paper gave me a lot to think about. I will give it some thought as it does raise important questions.
- 29/03/2004
- 21:35:31
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Interesting, factual, and funny. It was a light-hearted take on a serious matter. I understand what you were trying to accomplish but it didn't come across as outstanding. That is why I only gave you a yellow smiliey. It would be hard to compare Aristotle to a modern day person and modern situations. You did a good job. A younger audience would enjoy your story.
- 11/02/2004
- 16:19:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is true. Your essay was very powerful, to the point, and what some people needed to hear. Good Job I give you an A+.
- 07/01/2004
- 22:56:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
As everyone has already stated this paper is worthy of an A. It is also sounds like a higher grade paper. I attend high school and it would surely be accepted there if you cited your sources. If you havn't heard of that yet look up what a bibliography is. You'll need it when you get into the upper grades. Good work though! You should be proud of your research.
- 20/12/2003
- 18:20:31
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You know it all. You spend all your time finding cheaters. Why don't you write an essay of your own, you're a hippocrite becuase you're not giving us the chance to say you're a cheater or have a poor paper. Well all of those users following him quit. He's a loser and you're a looser. Isn't there better ways to spend your time?I don't know if this paper was stolen or not. I gave it a good rating anyway because even if it was stolen it has added to the site. It is a good example of a paper on the westward expansiion and would help anyone needing to write a paper on the subject.
- 04/12/2003
- 18:52:53
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I read Hoba's comment but since I havn't read much poetry I can't validate it. This is by far your best poem submitted. It is very touching. This makes is quality work.
- 04/12/2003
- 17:45:30
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
So far I like the other poems you have written better. I think these poems could use work. I didn't feel pulled in by the strong essence of the poems. This is a sign that they could be improved.
- 04/12/2003
- 17:42:27
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I gave it an average because I'm bias and don't care much for poetry to begin with. The poems were as interesting as they could possibly be based on the subject matter. The poems were gloomy, have you written anything of hope that would brighten someone's day?
- 04/12/2003
- 17:39:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay was brief but that was its only drawback. All the main important points were included. Someone could easily elaberate on this paper.Good Job.
- 01/12/2003
- 21:49:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a quality essay. It handles a difficult subject with ease. But I think it could be shortened or revised (reworded)my only complaint was that several paragraphs repeated what you had already stated. You do not need to repeat yourself the protagonsits problem is already reenforced.
- 28/11/2003
- 18:37:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
As you can read above my user name is yankee842 that is because I'm a Unionist to the death and will become a historian. I believe that this essay is a disgrace. What did you turn this into your school for? As people have already stated it has no organization, timeline, or constant direction. You even missed the key points. Without the key points this essay is poor. Random facts about the Civil War you didn't even mention Amerham Lincoln was President. As Babylon said it hard to believe you wrote this. A paper of the magnitue should not be allowed on the cheathouse site because it is not worthy of 350 points.
- 26/11/2003
- 18:20:36
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I'm reading a book on reconstruction after the Civil War right now its twice the size of the Bible. You touched on the key points of reconstruction but touched is the key word. As Pixel brought up the reconstruction process also had bad points. Even for the blacks it was not all positive. Reconstruction of the south after the Civil War could be compared to that of Iraq now. This is a well-written essay but could be expanded. These are just the key points. More research is needed to fairly represent the facts.
- 26/11/2003
- 18:11:52
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
To get a "good" rating from me this movie review/essay would have to be revised. It would have to be longer and more in depth. The subject is interesting but that alone is carrying this essay.
- 23/11/2003
- 23:49:28
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
They way you wrote the excuses you made them sound very dramatic. They were good excuses and likely work if done right. If done wrong they'd be a hillarious spectical. Have you ever used one of these yourself?
- 23/11/2003
- 21:57:57
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Everyone! If you rate my essay negative please leave a comment stating why. All the essays I submit I view are at least average and have been accepted by my school. I just want to know why you think my essays are bad so I can improve. If you do not leave a comment stating your reasoning I will email you for an answer.
- 23/11/2003
- 19:59:03
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay makes many good points. However you did not state the benifit of following these guidelines or the drawbacks of not following them. If you explained why these guidlines our helpful it might improve your score. No big deal but there was also several typing errors present in this essay.
- 23/11/2003
- 17:04:00
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
By chance did you submit American Education vs. Asian Education twice? It's a good essay but it sounds oddly familar. If there's a difference in the two let me know. If you did not submit it twice then one of you is cheating.
- 22/11/2003
- 21:35:41
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Attention: people if you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve them.What makes this essay bad? I know it's boring, however it is factual with scienfic terms, it would be helpful in a science class. Please explain your reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 21:03:27
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Attention people! If you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve in the future.What makes this essay bad? I know it's brief but the facts are their and my teacher thought it was interesting. Please explain your reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 21:00:28
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hey people if you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve.What makes this essay bad? I followed my assignment and explained the 14th amendment. Please explain your reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 20:58:00
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hey people if you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve.What makes this essay bad? Please explain your reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 20:56:24
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hey people if you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve.What makes this essay bad? I know it's brief. Please explain your reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 20:54:50
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Hey people if you rate my essays poor please inform me why so I can improve them.What makes this essay bad? I cited the web site that aided me research. I know it is brief. Please explain the reason for the negative rating. Thank You.
- 22/11/2003
- 20:52:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay demenstrates how you feel about education injustices. I like your strong voice. Your essay is well written and supported. I give it an A+ -I like it.
- 21/11/2003
- 20:22:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a wonderful essay. You state you postion and back it up clearly. It is true we shouldn't associate Arabs with terrorists as kuza said but a small group of Arab extremists have created a bad reputation for their whole people. The American people are scared. What do you expect them to think? The Arabs are even killing there own. It's a sad world now. Innocent until proven guilty dosn't seem to apply to every race anymore.
- 21/11/2003
- 18:00:40
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
What I like most about your bookreport is that you're not giving the student that might use it for his own work all the answers. It is just the start of a quality book report. The sudent actually has to read the book to fill in the blanks so it is not cheating them out of the pleasure of a good story.
- 20/11/2003
- 18:52:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It's not your fault this is a well written essay but the topic is Boring to begin with. You didn't hold my interst, I was just reading dry facts on a page like out of a textbook. If I want to do more of that I can go back to school.By the way you cited your references that was good.
- 19/11/2003
- 18:43:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It wasn't very convincing. Sure laptops would be nice but you didn't support your argument enough. There are several other benifits for having laptops in school that you failed to mention. It's hard to develop a strong case in 500 words. Was that the limit? In any case revise it and perhaps don't talk about parents as much but focus on how it can benifit school performance.
- 19/11/2003
- 18:38:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I had to go to the website to make sure you were telling the truth. This is shocking! This shouldn't happen! I can't believe it! I call it brainwashing America's youth. The essay itself is only o.k. but I am happy you brought this to the attention of others.
- 19/11/2003
- 18:22:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
staples is right this is a joke, not an essay. Aside from that I love it. It was fun to read and down right hilarious.
- 18/11/2003
- 23:51:57
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I read it. I rated it average. What you gonna do about it? I gave it average because I hate Frankenstien. Though I thought your study notes covered all the basics, were clear to read, and well organized. You could easily write an essay from this.
- 18/11/2003
- 23:18:10
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You have built a good case supporting your position with quality sources. I can tell you have a strong opinion, I like your voice. However I'd like to defend my country by saying not ALL Americans are revengful compared to some countries you'd think we handled everything in a civil manner. The general population does not think evil doing should be punished with more evil doing. We are generally a peaceful people.
- 18/11/2003
- 23:06:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My essay topic was the steps taken before the Trans. Railroad came to be not on enviromental issues and stuff like that. Perhaps you should write a paper on the subject.
- 18/11/2003
- 20:18:08
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I loved reading this book and I loved reading your essay. It was very informative but kept my intrest. As a history buff it makes me want to read the book again.For further reading have you read Battle Cry Of Freedom by James McPherson?
- 18/11/2003
- 20:07:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I only knew half of the history of the church you presented. It was very imformative and kept my interst. Good job. Hoever it would be better if you cited your souces. Other than that it seems higher than a 7th grade level paper.
- 18/11/2003
- 19:53:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I thought your essay was O.K. but it could be improved. I seem to be at a loss of words right now.
- 18/11/2003
- 17:31:18
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is practically if not exactly a copy of an essay you have already submitted on social security.
- 18/11/2003
- 17:29:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I didn't learn much of anything. You have written your essay much like a list that isn't very interesting. You have not persuaded me to travel to Sweeden. Needless to say your essay needs help. You need to revise it so its more than dry facts.
- 18/11/2003
- 16:13:16
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It sounds like NZ could right a Bible size book on their fines. WOW! Yes they did sound ridiculous and I'd be broke the first day I went there.I have one question do they warn you about the laws or do you find out about them after breaking them?
- 17/11/2003
- 23:55:45
- Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
The first thing that comes to ind after reading this paper is its huge!I think any paper of this length deserves a green smiley just for the effort it took to type it. Your essay is very informative and oddly interesting. It is an excellent paper.Oh one question does you teacher grade on quality or length? LOL
- 17/11/2003
- 23:50:16
- Score: 22 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
I usually don't enjoy reading essays of this nature but you kept me interested in the topic. This might even be a college level paper. I was very suprised and learned a lot.
- 17/11/2003
- 23:36:08
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hoba this is for your benifit you wanted me to leave comments so I'll leave something on everything you submit. However I'm just writing nonsence because I don't know what I can write about study notes other than they look and sound like study notes to me.
- 17/11/2003
- 23:31:47
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
What can I say? I agree with Hoba about the introduction but that can easily be fixed. I loved the movie gladiator and I love your essay. I think it is a quality paper.
- 17/11/2003
- 23:28:14
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
Thanks for advising me not to go to New Zealand from that list it sounds horrible. Just for the heck of it I'd like you to make another list expressing some of the ridiculous fines. I can tell you likely wrote this list in a moment of frustration.
- 17/11/2003
- 23:20:25
- Score: 30 out of 34 people found this comment useful.
I thought your essay was good. It was very informative and I didn't have questions at the end however is sounds like you copied it directly from a textbook.
- 17/11/2003
- 22:40:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was very interesting, sounds like you experiemented with the idea. However I do not believe you created a strong argument supporting why drinking is good therefore I wasn't persuaded to go out and buy a beer.
- 17/11/2003
- 20:49:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with ccmustangs it sounds half-heartedly written. This is a topic that should if written right invoke strong emotion. I read your essay and it didn't. The facts are there but it could have been more descriptive to help convey your voice. Enough said about that you did a pretty good job if this was from memory.
- 17/11/2003
- 20:42:03
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I rated it good however I think this essay could have used more thought. Your title is the start of Coca-cola... that's what you wrote the dry facts. Perhaps in another essay about the company you could talk about the troubles the company has faced. Coca-cola used actually use cocaine in its drinks.
- 17/11/2003
- 20:37:45
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
WOW. I agree with you that animal testing should be stopped and this essay developed a strong case supporting that. It's inhumane to say the least, but animal rights activists have been trying to end it for years. Your essay if very informative, and very persausive through your voice I could tell you cared about the topic.
- 17/11/2003
- 20:28:45
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Your essay did not interest me at all.It was a sea of words that did not create a logical story and it wasn't very descriptive. I think this essay needs a lot of work.
- 17/11/2003
- 20:17:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You presented the facts why people lie but how is that persuasive?
- 16/11/2003
- 21:34:57
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I'm not saying this isn't a good process paper but what did you show/prove?You could have easily copied the steps straight from a cookbook. Does typing a recipe up make it your own work?
- 16/11/2003
- 21:26:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay is O.K. it has a lot of grammatical errors. As I read this essay is is mostly comparing. I'd like to know more of the morals and the contrasting principals at how these two stories differ.
- 16/11/2003
- 20:43:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
When you said technilogical revolution I was thinking the transformation today into a world of computers but either way your essay needs to be longer. I doubt Admin will accept it. perhaps you can do some more research, campare/contrasting/ and general revising and submit it again. It is a good start.
- 13/11/2003
- 23:50:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really like your story. You incorporated several techniques making the story both informative, catchy, and most of all fun to read!
- 13/11/2003
- 23:19:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think you covered practically everything there is to be covered. Following these recommendations will definately aid to good health. You did your research thoroughly good job!
- 13/11/2003
- 23:16:44
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
This was a great report. It had a hook at the beginning and kept me interested. Computers are both devices of good and evil it depends on who is behind the keyboard. You had good examples of how computers are changing the world. Civilization cannot drift backwards now, we are permanently going to be surrounded by technology.
- 11/11/2003
- 22:58:15
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very helpful putting useful information in one spot. It is even has works cited.Overall, a pretty good, organized essay. As ccmustangs2001 said it is very informative. I don't think a report of this nature needs a hook you're just stating the facts and out of interest I read your whole report.
- 11/11/2003
- 22:41:23
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
WOW! What a great report! You're only in first grade? You did a great job. You gave a summary of the story and that's a book report. My only suggestion is to include the name of the book and the author next time so other people can easily find it and read it. Did you like the book? It sounds good to me. Keep up the effort! Your writing improves with practice.
- 11/11/2003
- 20:53:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I noticed serveral typing/grammer errors that need to be fixed. However, your ideas are clear and I loved your paper. I am huge John Wayne fan, but don't think this rates with his top performances though it's close. I think John Wayne's hate for doctor's is not clearly stated since only one drunken scene explains the ordeal (but that's not your fault). I think Wayne's character Marlowe is protrayed as a man angry at the world. I saw that you were a college Sophmore, being a college student you should think about your word choice... kid soldiers is not college level perhaps child soldiers, or boy soldiers. These comments are just food for thought. Your essay was worthy of a John Wayne Yo-oh! You celebrated a wonderful movie!
- 11/11/2003
- 20:21:35
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I think this is a good opinion paper. You have to however take into consideration that people of contradicting opinions will be reading this essay, and I am one of them. My cousin, a woman, was a paratrooper for four years. She jumped out of airplanes along with the men. The men learned to accept her. They went through the same experiences with her. Life lessons are learned, and I think they should be learned in a co-ed environment. So a woman is more sensitive or is not as strong? Team work a man soldier can help her out. Isn't it the way we handle things in civilian society?
- 10/11/2003
- 22:52:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay provokes thought, it makes a person think about the issue of drugs and how it should be handled.Good grammer, good research, great all around paper.
- 07/11/2003
- 18:43:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I can tell you did a lot of research and took your time I like that. However you used lots of big fancy words to get your point across when it would be just as effective if not more so in plainer English. You need to address how being a leader and what is involved is applied to everyday situations like being a big brother or sister.
- 03/11/2003
- 11:51:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You stated the facts but it did not hold my attention. It was not interesting. I didn't see what the dangers were or what was so wrong. State your opinion more. Persuade me.
- 03/11/2003
- 11:47:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It was organized, had all the factual information but I'd recieve it better if it were in essay form instead of outline. After all you submited it as an essay right? I'll have to give a yellow smiley.
- 02/11/2003
- 19:55:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You did a lot of research! This is a good, solid paper and should not have trouble getting accepted. You were able to make a complicated topic understandable to a person who sucks at science like me.
- 02/11/2003
- 19:53:25
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I think this essay could be expanded as not all the main points/aspects of the thirty years war was explained. However, all in all it was a good essay and perhaps a start to a higher level paper.
- 02/11/2003
- 19:09:17
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a contraversal topic that was well written on. It express the ideas now present in our society about obtaining an unrealistic image. This essay is important for every woman to read.
- 02/11/2003
- 19:02:12
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very informative. Very organized with sound and reinforced ideas.
- 02/11/2003
- 18:54:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a wonderful essay, definately college level and worthy of an A. You should be proud of this piece of work. You know and explained your subject well.
- 02/11/2003
- 18:42:46
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.