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  • Thoughts

    very nice job! thoroughly argued your point and shed new light on the horrible myths of pot.
    • 24/12/2003
    • 02:18:45
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    its really funny but i dont quite understand it"Well if you have your paper in the front it will make it harder for the child to pull more of the roll from its original state, as opposed to if you had your paper in the back, the kid could pull it so hard, tons of it will roll because of the downward motion, and this may cause the tug to be to powerful and may rip the toilet paper" i dont understand this part. It might just be me but i think u should explain it a little better. good job tho
    • 09/12/2003
    • 22:45:11
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    Hmm. Not really sure about this one. I personally didnt think it was that funny. Thats just my opinion.
    • 30/11/2003
    • 22:22:20
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    Overall, i would like to say Good job. Your essay is very simple and is almost like an outline. It helped me out a lot with my english assignment. Thanks
    • 30/11/2003
    • 22:12:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    I didn't think the essay was that funny. There were some funny parts though,like when the girl falls and all of her equipment falls off her. Overall: Satisfactory.
    • 30/11/2003
    • 21:53:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    Overall it was a pretty good essay, you had nice organization and the grammar was quite good. I think the highlight of your essay was your use of quotes. Good Job
    • 30/11/2003
    • 21:44:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    i thought this was a great essay. reading the beginning of the essay, i wasnt quite sure why you were writing so passionately about a subject such as fairy tales but once i was done i got to see the picture as a whole and that was when i understood. good job.
    • 30/11/2003
    • 03:47:25
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    i liked your essay, it was concise, strongly supported, and well organized. You dont waste any time with the fluff which is a very good thing. Good Job.
    • 30/11/2003
    • 03:39:54
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    I wont lie, i thought ur essay could use improvement. first of all i thought it was a little too short, maybe if u added more support it would strengthen ur essay.
    • 30/11/2003
    • 03:31:07
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • HAHAH

    This is probably the best essay in this entire website! It was definitely enjoyable to read and the grammar itself was top-notch. What a great idea for a persuasive essay! Good Job!
    • 25/11/2003
    • 01:54:34
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    It was a pretty good essay, and probably would have persuaded me if i had disagreed with you. As a junior in high school i know first hand that an extra hour of sleep would do marvels to my attendance and overall academic performance and i agree with the points made in your essay
    • 25/11/2003
    • 01:40:50
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.