User Details For: teddygraham540
Essay List
The Power Of Perspective.
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This is a short story called, "The Deed". The assignment required the use of flashbacks and dialogues in a way that give a little twist at the end. The story revolves around boxing and retaliation.
- 1794 words (7 pages)
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The Title is "I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings Should not be read in schools", this is an essay supporting the idea that the book should not be taught in school due to its explicit content.
- 900 words (4 pages)
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This short story is called "Fight For Justice". it is a story about war and the horror of battle
- 1110 words (4 pages)
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This essay is entitled "one of life's necesities". it is an essay about dieting; the many forms of diets and other information regarding diets.
- 1535 words (6 pages)
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This essay is entitled "the search for self-awareness". it is an essay about the book "the invisible man" and how the author's views change once he reaches self-awareness.
- 1552 words (6 pages)
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This essay is entitled "the way of learning". it is an essay about how people learn and uses some quotes from the book "Siddhartha".
- 1346 words (5 pages)
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This is a description of a moment of achievement. In this case it is recieving a 4.0 gpa on my report card
- 511 words (2 pages)
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This was an poetry practice assignment where we chose a color and wrote a descriptive sentence with it. The same thing was done with rain.
- 180 words (1 pages)
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This is a close reading aka analysis of the poem "Landscape with the Fall of Icarus" by William Carlos Williams.
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This is a Biography of W.E.B Dubois, the man who started the NAACP.
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This is a Biography of William Carlos Williams. It talks about how his life affected his poetry
- 440 words (2 pages)
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This is an analysis of the poem, Theme For English B by Langston Hughes. This is entitled "Analysis of Theme from english B"
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This assignment dealt with writing two different poems and mixing them together to make one poem. Its entitled "Abstractions"
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This is essay is entitled "Soda Ban". The assignment asked for a speech and thus the essay is in speech form. It is against the soda ban.
- 985 words (4 pages)
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This essay is entitled "Cross Cultural Experience". The point of the assignment was to assimilate oneself into another culture and write about his or her experience
- 846 words (3 pages)
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Book: Hiroshima Author: JOhn Hersey This is a synopsis of Hiroshima. It gives a brief summary and commentary of important events.
- 595 words (2 pages)
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Book: Hiroshima Author: JOhn Hersey This is an personal reaction paper to the book "HIroshima". It touches upon and emphasizes important events.
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Comments List
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very nice job! thoroughly argued your point and shed new light on the horrible myths of pot.- 24/12/2003
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its really funny but i dont quite understand it"Well if you have your paper in the front it will make it harder for the child to pull more of the roll from its original state, as opposed to if you had your paper in the back, the kid could pull it so hard, tons of it will roll because of the downward motion, and this may cause the tug to be to powerful and may rip the toilet paper" i dont understand this part. It might just be me but i think u should explain it a little better. good job tho- 09/12/2003
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- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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Hmm. Not really sure about this one. I personally didnt think it was that funny. Thats just my opinion.- 30/11/2003
- 22:22:20
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
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Overall, i would like to say Good job. Your essay is very simple and is almost like an outline. It helped me out a lot with my english assignment. Thanks- 30/11/2003
- 22:12:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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I didn't think the essay was that funny. There were some funny parts though,like when the girl falls and all of her equipment falls off her. Overall: Satisfactory.- 30/11/2003
- 21:53:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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Overall it was a pretty good essay, you had nice organization and the grammar was quite good. I think the highlight of your essay was your use of quotes. Good Job- 30/11/2003
- 21:44:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
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i thought this was a great essay. reading the beginning of the essay, i wasnt quite sure why you were writing so passionately about a subject such as fairy tales but once i was done i got to see the picture as a whole and that was when i understood. good job.- 30/11/2003
- 03:47:25
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
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i liked your essay, it was concise, strongly supported, and well organized. You dont waste any time with the fluff which is a very good thing. Good Job.- 30/11/2003
- 03:39:54
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
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I wont lie, i thought ur essay could use improvement. first of all i thought it was a little too short, maybe if u added more support it would strengthen ur essay.- 30/11/2003
- 03:31:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
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This is probably the best essay in this entire website! It was definitely enjoyable to read and the grammar itself was top-notch. What a great idea for a persuasive essay! Good Job!- 25/11/2003
- 01:54:34
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
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It was a pretty good essay, and probably would have persuaded me if i had disagreed with you. As a junior in high school i know first hand that an extra hour of sleep would do marvels to my attendance and overall academic performance and i agree with the points made in your essay- 25/11/2003
- 01:40:50
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.