This is a bad topic area to write about in my opinion. But I guess others may think differently. I thought poorly of this just because the fact that the subject matter is almost non-existant. Try again why a better subject. Sorry.
- 13/11/2003
- 00:53:32
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I don't mean to criticize, but this essay has a lot of room for improvement. The transitions need to be more with the flow, and the paragraphs need to be put together a little better. Other than that, this essay has strong potential. Just give a little more effort, and your there.
- 13/11/2003
- 00:43:19
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After reading this paper, I have to admit that I am quite impressed. The introduction gave a clear, detailed description of what capitalism is and what socialism is. The transitions were very fluent and gave the paper a positive flow. The conclusion was a great way to end it with a bang. But, the final sentence should close out the essay better. As far as the information goes, superb!!!! I give this essay an A-. Good Work.
- 13/11/2003
- 00:39:50
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