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Essay List
"Eliot's Waste Land"
- 565 words (2 pages)
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Symbolism in Charlotte Perkins Gilman's "The Yellow Wallpaper"
- 718 words (3 pages)
- 388
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Film Analysis: The Great Gatsby
- 954 words (4 pages)
- 173
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Realists/Naturalists in Literature: Cather, Crane, Twain, and James
- 1082 words (4 pages)
- 197
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Movie review of Primary Colors in regards to Presidential campaigns and elections.
- 2497 words (10 pages)
- 65
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Comments List
Confusion of Thesis
I felt your essay was a great explaination of the plot for the first Gothic novel. However, I became confused within the first paragraph as to what your essay/paper was going to be discussing. It's not clearly stated. You have all this background information which is great, but then you just jump right into the plot of the novel. It's a hard transition and confuses the reader. Other than that, very well done.- 28/03/2002
- 09:59:56
- Score: 11 out of 19 people found this comment useful.