One huge problem in this essay is how the reader is going to get bored really fast. "The next step is this and the next step is that and the next step is this then they did something else and the next step was this" Too much of that will make anyone go insane. I'm suprised this has a grade of 81% for tenth grade. I think someone lied when they submitted this.
- 13/01/2004
- 20:10:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is really informative and I learned a lot from it!
- 07/12/2003
- 22:44:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a nice essay, it is thought out nicely and I learned something from it, since I fall into the passive catagory, but... It needs some work on the spelling a little bit but mostly the grammer. Some sentences are just akward to read.
- 07/12/2003
- 22:05:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked this essay, it points out what everyone deep down likes about this movie, how you get to see the other point of view. The only problem is how this author refers to blacks as "negroes", that term is a little bit out-dated and can be slightly offensive to some.
- 07/12/2003
- 21:47:39
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.