Personally I think that regardless of age, these people are a threat to the community and have committed a crime that must be punished according to the circumstances. You put forward a good argument though and it wass reasonably organised.well done.
- 07/12/2003
- 01:57:45
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great - loved it - i live in australia and i feel your pain...well only some of it...but at least I now know not to ever ever ever go to New Zealand. Thanx!
- 03/12/2003
- 04:14:22
- Score: 19 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
After reading your essay it makes me want to read to book - it's very well set out and interesting to read.The oly thing i found a bit annoying was that in some places you put "they're" when you're supposed to put "their" and vice versa. The way I do it when I'm writing is I remember that "they're" means 'they are'. So, for instance you wouldn't say; "They are social life is different" You'd say : Their social life is different.Anyway, sorry for boring you, it was actually a pretty good essy.
- 02/12/2003
- 01:58:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like it. I think you should definitely continue it, and develope it into a novel or something if you can. It's great, although some of the lines you use are soooo typical in almost every novel - consider revising.
- 01/12/2003
- 23:18:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
luvd the arguments you put forward although Im still in two minds about the whole idea of cloning. Pretty good essay though.
- 01/12/2003
- 02:47:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very informative and interesting, easy to read. Well done!!!
- 30/11/2003
- 22:43:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
think you did a great job - logically set out and well written. Wish i could give more insight but i haven't actually read the book!
- 30/11/2003
- 06:29:29
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glad you liked it - i wrote it a couple of years ago...and I don't know what the thing is either...It's just a monser thing. lol. sorry the light i'm shedding is very dimmed. :)
- 30/11/2003
- 06:13:01
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
First of all most of the reasons you pointed out for people migrating to Australia are correct, But you left out the fact that many people are migrating because of high crime rates in their home countries/different government; eg. Australia is a 'free' country where people from a dictatorship might believe they'd have a 'better' life. Also the real reason the Aboriginal children were taken away from their families is because the Caucasians wanted to educate them. It is true that they were separated from the 'white' kids, but they were not taken away to "breed out the Aboriginality" like you say. Anyway, I think with a bit more research your essay could be quite good.
- 30/11/2003
- 02:55:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Just thought I'd let you know that this IS AN EXCELLENT essay!!!
- 30/11/2003
- 02:35:48
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
nice story but i think you could have written it better - don't get me wrong, it's not bad, but do people really talk like that? I know i don't say father after every sentence and my dad never calls me daughter. Overall though, i think it's sweet...maybe you could develope it better, I don't know, there just seems to be something missing.
- 30/11/2003
- 02:26:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
first of all I do think that pornography is NOT the best thing in the world, but in my opinion if the people who allow themselves to be exposed are doing it voluntarily, and the people who see it are not young children, there shouldn't be a national outcry. each to his own ya know. Second of all in that last sentence you said it demeans the human BEEN. I think you meant human BEING.Third, well done; nice essay.
- 29/11/2003
- 02:54:04
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Never read the book but I liked what you wrote. :)
- 29/11/2003
- 02:34:12
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
WOW, I really enjotyed reading that. I found it really interesting and well researched. What i thought particularly intersting was the "one child policy". I think it must be terrible for the children who are shipped off to orphanages or even killed (mostly girls): I read an article once about the 'one child policy'. It showed a picture of a tiny baby lying dead on the side of the road, with hundreds of people walking past, disregarding it. Anyway, good essay mate!
- 29/11/2003
- 02:30:06
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Well written essay but I disagree. I don't think 'the human wheel of evolution has stopped turning'. 'survival of the fittest' as you probably know, doesn't necissarily refer to the physically fit.Humans have set new standards in evolution; we've become so far advanced mentally, compared to other mammals.By cloning and genetically engineering humans, we are stopping the evolutionary wheel by disallowing nature to take it's course. What I mean is that if we become too advanced, we won't die, we will overpopulate and kill everything until there is nothing left for us to live on, which will eventually lead to the death of the enire world let alone the human race.I don't know if anything i've written made sense to you, but I thought I may as well try. :)lol.
- 29/11/2003
- 02:19:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Hey ppl, please comment on my essay...especially if you rate it - i wanna know what u think. thanx 4 any feedback.
- 28/11/2003
- 21:39:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great job by the way, and after reading this I must agree that same sex marriages should be allowed. I did leagal studies and as you said, 'there is no justifiable legal reason' why same sex couples shouldn't get married.In truth, they can get married and have the whole ceremony etc. but it it just not recognisable in law. ie. its not not a legal marriage and therefore normal marriage laws do not apply (for example if a spouse of an opposite sex marraige dies without a will, the money usually goes to the husband or wife, but in a same sex 'marriage' the laws don't apply and the money matters are usually taken to court or given to the nearest blood relative)
- 28/11/2003
- 21:11:36
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. Really informative and looks like you've researched quite a bit. might even use this in my french project.:) thanx.
- 25/11/2003
- 22:24:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.