good content and well researched but paragraphing! This needs to be reviewed for that but overwise it is good.
- 23/11/2003
- 11:05:44
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
All round very good work especially for junior high.
- 23/11/2003
- 11:01:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
didnt know all that, very interesting and well writen, good piece.
- 23/11/2003
- 10:57:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
short and to the point but a bit too short, im not sure wat kind of mark youd get if you handed this in but it would'nt be good.
- 23/11/2003
- 10:47:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very good, paragraphing could have been better but good content and im sure my teacher would be impressed with it too.
- 23/11/2003
- 10:39:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.