This is very opinionated. I can agree with some of your opinions but for an essay it is ok. I think there should have been a check in Word but thats ok. But an overall ok. This should be something you send to letters to the editor.
- 30/11/2003
- 17:31:23
- Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
I know people who have acted like that and have that happen to them. You should write more of these.
- 30/11/2003
- 16:29:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
We still have this arguement in my collage biology class.
- 30/11/2003
- 16:25:26
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I see a lot of essays that i have had to do in my high school career. I liked it but I see you are missing a few facts. I like how you have it nonbias. It is hard to do that in an essay like this.
- 26/11/2003
- 23:09:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I had to do an essay ike this in my AP hisory class. I think you did a good job on this.. this is how my teacher is always trying to how to write.
- 26/11/2003
- 23:06:16
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I feel the same way..
- 26/11/2003
- 22:37:57
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I liked your essay.. I wish i could rant like that sometimes..
- 26/11/2003
- 22:36:37
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.