good job .keep on writing
- 03/12/2003
- 16:31:04
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I thought this esssy was informative , factful and also serious. But i thought you could have gave it a little more inthusiasm. i give you a straight face
- 02/12/2003
- 18:34:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I agree with them about it being a hazard on the road. Although you might need it emergency cases. nice essay!
- 02/12/2003
- 16:45:25
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I liked this essay I thought that it would be great in a foward or summary. Nice job.i give it a smiley
- 02/12/2003
- 15:14:52
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have never seen a story (long enough to be a book)so long but yet so factful and interesting. I liked what i read (for a long time) so i give you a smiley
- 01/12/2003
- 15:44:31
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I thought that this essay was very interesting because you dont see these type of topics too much. I liked this essay and i give it a 94%
- 01/12/2003
- 15:39:24
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay was ok. You needed to use names and be a little shorter on the first paragraph where you tell what the story is about.
- 01/12/2003
- 15:33:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really like this essay because it is up-beat , interesting (because everybody likes snack foods)and has alot of facts.It proves a great point
- 30/11/2003
- 20:44:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i thought that this story would pesuade any highschool student to at least think about going to college before taking that job at the local McDonalds.I really liked and it deserves a smile
- 30/11/2003
- 20:37:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i had never really thought of it that way but now that i look at it i see their point of view.
- 30/11/2003
- 20:25:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I thought that essay was very meaningful and interesting.It was also different from other essays because it talked about her instead if something else that has nothing to do with her.I give this essay a great score
- 30/11/2003
- 20:09:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i think that the essay has a point and it deserves a good rating which i gave
- 29/11/2003
- 17:47:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i liked it but o do not agree with all of it.Because pornagraphy is what sickos do to make money. And that they do what they want to do. and are not forced to do it.
- 29/11/2003
- 17:02:11
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I thought that this essay was clear writing with a strong message. I tottaly agree about the lowering of the drinking age , because it really just does not seem right. I thought that the writer of this story needs to keep writing because I can tell they have talent
- 29/11/2003
- 16:46:36
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.