This is a pretty good essay it has lots of facts, but it is not but together very well you need good transtions into the next sentences.
- 08/12/2003
- 15:26:52
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
What is going on here? Either something happened to make the paragraphs repeat or you just kept putting the same thing over and over again so you could submit a paper. Anyways I feel this is not a very good essay in what it does say it does not tell much or have a point.
- 08/12/2003
- 15:20:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This I feel is not quite and essay. If you had to summarize the constitution then this would be a good paper, but for an essay I feel this would not work.
- 03/12/2003
- 13:07:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the others the paper is very well written, but it could be made better by backing up your paper with examples of things that are left out.
- 03/12/2003
- 12:58:06
- Score: 18 out of 20 people found this comment useful.