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  • Good

    This is a pretty good essay it has lots of facts, but it is not but together very well you need good transtions into the next sentences.
    • 08/12/2003
    • 15:26:52
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • What?

    What is going on here? Either something happened to make the paragraphs repeat or you just kept putting the same thing over and over again so you could submit a paper. Anyways I feel this is not a very good essay in what it does say it does not tell much or have a point.
    • 08/12/2003
    • 15:20:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay?

    This I feel is not quite and essay. If you had to summarize the constitution then this would be a good paper, but for an essay I feel this would not work.
    • 03/12/2003
    • 13:07:39
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Could be made better

    I agree with the others the paper is very well written, but it could be made better by backing up your paper with examples of things that are left out.
    • 03/12/2003
    • 12:58:06
    • Score: 18 out of 20 people found this comment useful.