Misplaced apostrophe:places it's characters in states of guiltStrange para break:Romantic love is mutualbetween Hester and DimmesdaleBasically, try to avoid words that don't mean anything, like basically. Your commas should fall like knives in a circus act: don't over-use them. Sometimes you use a comma when what you mean is a semi-colon. There's some other squiffy para breaks in there. 'Very essential' is tautologous: is essential is already a superlative, you can't enhance it any further.It's really not a bad essay, but it's a crazy title. I feel sorry for you having to analyse the importance of love in literature in 700 words!
- 01/12/2003
- 16:30:40
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