This is a pretty good essay, that get its point across clearly. The only problem with it is that there is nto enough evidence proving its theme.
- 25/05/2004
- 12:31:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This was a GREAT ESSAY. I totally agree with the strong evidence and points you gave. This essay defanatly made me believe the author's point of view.
- 17/02/2004
- 17:02:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was an intresting topic that is not too common. One thing to watch out for is making a radical statement like, that if fashion never changed, we would still be in war.
- 17/02/2004
- 16:48:06
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was a good essay and was very good in detail. One thing to mention for robber baron would be the rebates that Rockefeller got from the railroads.
- 17/02/2004
- 16:36:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.