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• A study of the Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath and a description of the three stages of her "spiraling insanity"

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• A poem written about Margaret Attwood's book A Handmaids Tail. This is shaped like a burning cross and should be viewed by the attached file :)

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• "Manifest destiny in the mid 19th century was just another name for aggressive imperialism." Assess the validity of this statement. A 5 paragraph essay- good springboard

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• An account of The People's Temple Mass suicide and Jim Jones's persuasion and propaganda

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• A comparison of Elie Wiesel's book "Night" and Steven Spielberg's movie "Schindler's List." Historically accurate

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• A comparison of Prynne, Chillingworth, and Dimmesdale with emphasis on character and private feelings.

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• A study of Prejudice in Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird with emphasis on Boo Radley, Atticus Finch, and Tom Robinson

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Comments List

• Well done!

  Some use of passive voice which can be frowned upon by some teachers but other than that very informative and well structured :)
  • 12/12/2003
  • 23:42:16
  • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
    

• Hmm...

  The essay states that Marijuana was never legal in the US, but then later states that it was legal in 21 states around 1931, seems contradicting. Also use of first person pronouns is discouraged by most teachers. Other than than well done :)
  • 10/12/2003
  • 15:57:13
  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
    

• Well done

  Easy to follow and sure gave me insight into market research! While this essay is basic it still very well done and would serve as an excelent starting point for other essays on this or similar topic
  • 09/12/2003
  • 16:35:11
  • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
    

• Sub Par Work

  While this essay may be accurate it lacks content and correct grammar. Fragments and lack of punctuation plauge the essay (most noticeably in the Thrid Paragraph). Revision is a must and this essay should only be used as a very basic guide to the work "The Watsons go to Birmingham." I find it highly unlikely that an 11th grader wrote this or that it recieved a 93%.
  • 08/12/2003
  • 17:21:29
  • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.