What a great way to back up your paper with supporting data. A lot of people do not use references at the end of their essays to show the supporting data. You did a great job in doing that.
- 05/10/2005
- 16:11:22
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay is written with good points, but the format is a bit messed up, making it a bit hard to read. Watch how you submit future essays.
- 05/10/2005
- 16:09:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You definitely needed to add a conclusion to cap off a great ending to a great essay. It looks like you did cite some work inside of the essay, but you failed to provide your references at the end. Other than that, a superbly written essay.
- 07/03/2005
- 20:34:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay has been plagiarized from http://www.essaysample.com/essay/001271.html
- 06/03/2005
- 11:47:50
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
What a great use of references. Your use of references will provide quality support for rest of your essay. Superbly done.
- 12/10/2004
- 06:15:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This critique on Bourne Supremacy needs the title changed to reflect it accurately.
- 15/09/2004
- 13:23:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You backed up your paper with the needed support that most people have lacked to provide with references. What a great piece that you have submitted.
- 15/09/2004
- 10:01:55
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I am happy to see that you had good use of references. Nothing better to finish reading an essay and seeing a works cited list. Provides the support needed to back up the paper. Good job.
- 27/07/2004
- 13:28:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well structured paper, and great writing style. I like that you used references for this type of subject. It will really provide supporting details for your paper. Great job.
- 27/07/2004
- 08:56:31
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I was really entertained while reading this essay. Perfectly written, and kept the reader in the story. I enjoyed reading this, and look forward to others by you. Keep up the great work.
- 27/07/2004
- 08:53:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I disagree with pickle2suck on your poem. Like I said in a previous comment elsewhere, I do not read too many poems. Since I am returning the favor to you, I chose to read this, and rate it for you. Great poem and I am glad that I read it.
- 27/07/2004
- 08:30:49
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree with m_iria_m with the bibliography. I think it is a must to have references to back up the supporting detail of your paper. Great use of the works cited.
- 27/07/2004
- 08:27:07
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I don't read much poetry, but since you have rated a bunch of my essays, I decided to read yours, and rate it. I am glad that I made that decision because this is a well written poem. Superb job spoonman!!
- 27/07/2004
- 07:55:06
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Dang Phantom...why did all of the crabs die within 2 weeks of each other? What a coincidence. On the other note, I like your writing Vampire. You wrote this piece very well, and it is well structured. Good job on another work.
- 27/07/2004
- 07:31:49
- Score: 21 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
This was a good piece that brought out a different style in writers. Maybe it was intended for poetry, but all in all, this piece was good, and it is here to stay. Good rating for creative writing!!
- 27/07/2004
- 07:29:08
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Good paper on your views for raising the drinking age there in Canada, but will this ever stop the youth from acquiring alcohol. Young adults will go out of their way to get the alcohol if you keep it from them. Here in America, we just have to govern society with rules. Do I agree with them? Some I may, but when you have age limits for smoking and drinking, do you think that this stops the youth from doing it? No it does not, but it does make it harder for them. They will only hide from parents when they do do it.
- 18/07/2004
- 09:52:30
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Although I do not agree with your views, I rated your essay good because you have written a good essay on YOUR views. You have supportive quotes and references to back your view. I feel it is justified for the Iraqi people that we invaded. They were the people suffering. We may have given the reason for \"WMD\", but we may have just liberated a country that was living a life of fear and unhappiness. Between the Iraqi people and the Pakistani people dancing in the streets after the Taliban and Saddam were overthrown, is justification for me. People do not look at the big picture, but only to what the reason for the coalition to just invade a country? How would people react if we did find WMD in Iraq? We may not have found any weapons yet, but we did find the ingredients and evidence of the potential for making the WMD\'s.
- 17/07/2004
- 09:34:54
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
How many times are you going to post this essay on the site?
- 14/07/2004
- 13:50:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A superb essay to educate the uneducated on computer systems and programming. I liked the information provided to the reader to learn of the history of UNIX.
- 28/06/2004
- 13:55:23
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was a superbly written essay, but the only recommendation that I have for you for future essays would to break this essay up into several paragraphs rather than one big one. Other than that, the content was great and flowed well.
- 10/06/2004
- 09:03:33
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
This can be turned into a nice short story for a creative writing class, but right now this is just viewed as a journal entry.
- 08/06/2004
- 10:08:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Not a bad essay on anarchism within the arts. It was intimidating to see the length of the essay to read. You might have wanted to shorten it a bit to not scare off future readers.
- 08/06/2004
- 09:40:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
John, I guess you will get quite the critique on your essay with this dialogue of comments. What a superb way to fine tune your essay if you ever have to resubmit for something.
- 08/06/2004
- 09:33:04
- Score: 68 out of 74 people found this comment useful.
I feel that you could have strengthened this paper and provided great support with references to back up your views and ideas. Other than that, not a bad work for you.
- 07/06/2004
- 11:24:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I do not feel his party of choosing mattered when he was president. A majority of the military are Republican due to the viewpoints of the party towards the military. I still strongly agree that Reagan can be considered one of the best Presidents that served. Unfortunately, he has recently died and I feel sorry for Nancy, but she can be proud of the husband that she had.
- 07/06/2004
- 11:03:17
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay does have great potential and needs to be expounded on. I serve in the military and enjoy reading essays dealing with D-Day. Another thing, I was born on this anniversary date of D-Day. It was amazing how we fought through and won this battle, even through the ambush. It just shows how powerful the military of the United States can be, even though we lost a majority of our Americans on the beach of Normandy just trying to invade the beach.
- 07/06/2004
- 10:52:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is not a bad piece of writing, considering it has been written by a 7th grader. I would love to see where Part 2 goes with this. You have conveyed a few descriptive details that shows through time and practice, you will be a great writer. Keep it up.
- 07/06/2004
- 09:50:16
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Such an important topic. Think about all the trash that can not be recycled. Are we just going to keep piling everything higher and higher? Where will it all go?
- 07/06/2004
- 09:45:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You have provided some good points and ideas within your essay. I like your use of references to back up your paper. It is the only way to support your views and thoughts of your topic. Good job.
- 07/06/2004
- 09:09:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I do not feel that any essay off of this site should be plagiarized off of. I feel these essays and works are here for research and referencing. You have provided a good application here, but what good is it here on this site besides getting a rough idea of what can be used for future applications for others to see.
- 07/06/2004
- 09:06:17
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Such a superb paper and I am a reader who likes to bibliographies to back up points throughout the work. Great work and use of your references to back up your paper. You deserved the perfect score you received!!
- 07/06/2004
- 08:55:01
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Another great piece on poetry John. You have good writing style and portray to the reader pertinent information that helps the reader understand the poem. I am glad that someone is out there that is able to help the reader understand poetry because it is hard to understand the meaning and the feelings at times behind the poetry.
- 07/06/2004
- 08:30:44
- Score: 71 out of 75 people found this comment useful.
John, I like how dedicated you are to breaking down this poem. The way you enlighten me, as the reader, with the breakdown of the stanzas is commendable. I have never really looked that far into the breakdown of poems and I appreciate the work you have done to break this down for the reader.
- 07/06/2004
- 08:24:20
- Score: 50 out of 53 people found this comment useful.
This essay does not seem very strong and the writer seemed to save it with comments and another essay? Attention to detail is a must when turning in work. All this mumble down here in the comment section from the writer turns readers off even more.
- 24/05/2004
- 08:43:26
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
John...you wrote a very good essay. I like the thoughts you provided from the writer on the poem itself. What a great way that you portrayed it. Well done.
- 20/05/2004
- 18:12:05
- Score: 34 out of 41 people found this comment useful.
The information provided in this essay supports the way that society needed to take to find and locate abducted children before time beats them. I fully support the Amber Alert system. I have seen that since the introduction of this new alert system, children have been found rather more quickly than before.
- 11/05/2004
- 15:37:44
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I agree strongly with johnjjp. This essay is very strong, but could use some works cited to back up your research that you have done. I always agree with references and feel strongly with using them.
- 11/05/2004
- 15:31:42
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
What is amazing about this, as johnjjp has mentioned in his comment, was that this episode came just a few weeks before Janet would be promoting her newly produced CD that needed sales. What better way to get attention is at a highly watched sports game that millions would be watching.
- 11/05/2004
- 15:25:03
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
At times, you might think that with today's society, that the student controls the classroom. I feel that they should change the name from professor to facilitator with all of the discussion that the student provides. Alomost as if the student runs the pace and content of the class, while the professor just keeps them in line and on track.
- 28/04/2004
- 10:42:53
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
What a great and smooth review. No problems getting through it except for the extra text that I think is in a glitch here at CheatHouse at the beginning of the paragraphs. Great essay.
- 27/04/2004
- 12:30:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I thought that this was a great essay, but I misclicked on poor. I wanted to rate it good. It is a must read for others, and I doubt my faulty click will affect your essay. Once again, I am sorry.
- 27/04/2004
- 12:20:55
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
What a great article. I have always been into reading about the invasion and such, but I have also been thrown back by the number of deaths from war. For one, I was born on June 6th (D-Day) and I have served in the military for another.
- 27/04/2004
- 12:12:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Just a few words to help you better your essays in the future would to put your references in alphabetical order by author's last name. Other than that, not a badly written essay.
- 27/04/2004
- 11:34:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a great essay that goes into details of how the funding for schools operate. It is amazing how college players do not get paid, but if they win a bowl game or tournament game, they will receive monies towards that sports program. Schools need more funding, but not at the expense of my taxes...hahaha
- 16/03/2004
- 11:22:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this essay, but I am always fascinated by the daily news and media coverage of Mars. It is amazing where the world has come with technology. Great paper.
- 16/03/2004
- 11:19:05
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this essay. It also helped to make a stronger paper with the references you provided. You must provide references in order to back up your thoughts of the subject. Superb job.
- 16/03/2004
- 11:03:22
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I rated this essay with a green smiley because I feel that this essay is written good and you achieved what you wanted with portraying Descartes' God can be a deceiver. The only thing I can see is that the references need to be be placed in alphabetical order by author's last name. Something to remember for future papers.
- 16/03/2004
- 08:01:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not a bad essay, but it has been posted twice on the board.
- 10/03/2004
- 11:57:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I rated this essay with a green smiley, but it was posted twice on CheatHouse by the user. Essay looks good.
- 10/03/2004
- 07:58:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I feel that if this was in an essay format, it would be a better essay. This information can easily be pulled from numerous sites very quickly.
- 09/03/2004
- 14:40:49
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
First thing I would have to say is that it is important to cite your materials. It would totally help back up your points that you made since they were good points. It is necessary in the future to cite your work to make your points stand stronger and make the essay hold the views you have with the topic. Other than that, not a bad essay.
- 08/03/2004
- 11:40:11
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Using references in your work helped back up your work and puts it in perspective. It adds power to the paper. I wished that a lot more people utilized references on CheatHouse.
- 05/03/2004
- 09:36:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Outstanding paper and what a great way to back up your paper with references. A lot of people do not post references. This helps your essay tremendously.
- 27/02/2004
- 11:35:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a superb essay and provides references to back up the work. The only thing that can be changed in the future would be to alphabetize your authors by last name. Other than that, great work posted.
- 24/02/2004
- 15:17:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You wrote a good paper, but I do not agree with 100% ban of smoking. Smoking is legal and everyone's right to smoke. I live in Florida and it is banned in any public restaurant or bar that makes 10% of their income off of food sales. Pretty much all bars are smoke free inside. That law was just passed a few years ago. I have no problem with it, but I just carry my habit outside with no complaints. I do not like to bother nonsmokers with my habit indoors anyways. I do not agree with a total ban of smoking though. It is my choice to smoke and just because someone does not like smokers, then they have no room to complain about me smoking outside. You do have the freedom of speech, but don't worry about people that do smoke unless they are breaking the law. Until then, they have the right to smoke and you have the right to move away from them.
- 19/02/2004
- 08:11:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It is amazing at how the world for women has expanded to today. They have tons more rights now and a sense of equality. It seems at times that women might be held back at different job positions, but a perserverence on the woman will pay off. Nice practice essay.
- 19/02/2004
- 07:59:46
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a very strong case study concerning Wal-Mart. Good information to read on a big stock company.
- 18/02/2004
- 18:11:47
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Your statement was clearly defined and backed up. You made good points and a great topic to discuss in the world today. It seems a few years back that there was always something in the news dealing with the freedom of speech. You will get a lot of people to come by and agree. Great paper
- 17/02/2004
- 12:32:13
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay was written very nice. I agree with BlondeHoney. The intro does not some touching up, but like she said, it will come with time and practice. Other than that, it is a superb essay. Great job!!
- 13/02/2004
- 10:38:17
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay that flowed smoothly. Very interesting and kept my attention throughout. Provided great information.
- 04/02/2004
- 11:38:17
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay, but it is plagiarized from http://www.guardian.co.uk/elsewhere/journalist/story/0,7792,558033,00.html
- 04/02/2004
- 07:26:28
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Works cited portion of your paper needs to be in alphabetical order by author.
- 02/02/2004
- 16:30:50
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very organized essay and lots of research. This is a great essay with key points. Also has works cited to back up the information.
- 02/02/2004
- 11:23:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay. Could be better with some sources to back up the information provided.
- 02/02/2004
- 11:15:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay really needs some sources to back up the information provided within. Sounds somewhat opinionated, but needs backed up with outside sources.
- 02/02/2004
- 11:13:08
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good opinionated essay. Shows where the writer stands from this point of view. Very well written with a source to back you up on your view.
- 02/02/2004
- 09:03:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay and superb use of quoting the book. Nicely organized.
- 02/02/2004
- 09:00:25
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The essay is well written, but I agree with Eggy on the fact of trying to use more of your own words to write an essay. Sources are good to back up your writing with, but quoting several sources can make your essay not flow smoothly with the different writing styles from the sources.
- 02/02/2004
- 08:57:30
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay has great content, but needs to flow smoother. The gaps can be filled with more research. Watch the punctuation and use the grammar check in Microsoft Word. Good essay, but can be tuned up.
- 02/02/2004
- 08:48:33
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Not a bad essay. One thing that would need to be changed for another essay with works cited would be to aphabetize by author. Other than that...great essay.
- 02/02/2004
- 08:44:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well organized synopsis on the topic. I am sure there could be a lot more to get a longer paper, but this is a great piece.
- 02/02/2004
- 08:38:52
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Looks like a lot of research was put into this paper. Well organized piece of work. A lot of works cited to verify paper with. Nice paper.
- 29/01/2004
- 14:30:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper is very organized and lots of time and research has been put into it. I work in the aviation field for the US Navy and I can relate with it. Most of it holds true in the Navy also. Great piece of work.
- 29/01/2004
- 14:18:17
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I liked reading this essay. Great piece of work. This short essay provides good thoughts.
- 29/01/2004
- 14:05:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
How can you comment on your own essay saying it is easy to understand. You wrote it or did you?
- 29/01/2004
- 13:31:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Overall, a great paper. The only mistake I see is that your works cited should be alphabetical to author's last names. The paper was well organized.
- 29/01/2004
- 12:41:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This had to be a great speech to listen to. It contains a lot of information and flows smoothly.
- 28/01/2004
- 20:35:52
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The only thing I see wrong is that the works cited should be in alphabetical order by the author's last names. Other than that, great paper.
- 28/01/2004
- 20:23:27
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very organized and showed the time for research with a list of works cited. Very good paper and way to bring the point. It will educate and keeps the reader's attention.
- 28/01/2004
- 20:19:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I learned a lot from reading this short essay and the few comments. Good job on the research.
- 28/01/2004
- 19:54:27
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This essay was written very well from the writer's point of view. It shows the writer's feelings and opinions of the content covered. It sounds like the writer likes this subject and keeps your attention throughout. Very well done.
- 13/01/2004
- 13:01:13
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is well organized essay with lots of works cited. Well put together and very informative.
- 13/01/2004
- 12:55:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay is written very poorly with no capitalization. Contains a good synopsis though.
- 13/01/2004
- 07:20:12
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
What is this? Totally not even close to an essay and possibly you need to see a shrink.
- 13/01/2004
- 07:13:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay was great and understandable. It is funny how girls and boys will differ with what they play with.
- 12/01/2004
- 08:29:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a good paper, but his paper totally needs references so people can research the facts that you have stated.
- 11/01/2004
- 07:47:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have to say that this is a very informative and educating essay. More people need to read essays like this so that they can realize and learn beneficial things. I use the Google far more than any other search engine. Great essay and thanks for posting it.
- 11/01/2004
- 07:38:29
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
It looks like you did good research to put this paper together. Good job on the paper and I wenjoyed reading it.
- 09/01/2004
- 11:52:56
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Very good paper and tons of work put into this one. Great job!!
- 08/01/2004
- 15:37:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper looks like it should have some citations. Otherwise the paper isn't too bad for a synopsis. Cocaine, effects, crack, and overdose is a much broader subject than this.
- 08/01/2004
- 15:13:59
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay with a superb foundation. It also relates with todays society that could help educate the younger generation.
- 08/01/2004
- 15:00:31
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
This essay is written good and you can see that it is from the writer's heart. Is it a true story? And if it is, did you ever make it back?
- 08/01/2004
- 08:04:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree that this paper should have been graded higher. This was a well written paper with tons of great ideas on how to better manage your time. Time is never wasted, only mismanaged. Most of society would benefit from reading this paper.
- 07/01/2004
- 15:50:53
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This paper had a foundation and was well written. I totally agree with the paper and its views. I feel that when people do download music that they get a sneak peek at the artist and then in turn will buy music from the artist. Good paper.
- 07/01/2004
- 15:40:37
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very informative and provides many legitimate references that make this essay credible.
- 06/01/2004
- 14:41:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I am not sure if Malcolm X would fall under great black people in history. I agree with the rest of them. That paragraph is opinionated and should have been changed to speaking of your views like the rest of the paper. Rest of the paper is great and I respect you for your views.
- 06/01/2004
- 14:34:28
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It is not the United States' fault with the war in Iraq. The fault must lie beneath Saddam and his extremists. I am in the military and served in Iraq for the war, but have no hard feelings that I was there away from my family for a long period of time. You have to look at the families in Iraq that would just love to have the freedom that us Americans have. I will give up my time just to fight for this right. It stinks that there are people in the world that will cause the terrorism that we live with everyday. Once Saddam was captured, life in Iraq should calm down in the future. Right now, people are acting out of hatred against the United States until we can get some control there in Iraq.
- 06/01/2004
- 13:45:00
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay will definitely, if adhered to, keep you alive on the road if everyone else on the road adheres to it. I was just involved in an accident where if they had followed these rules, there would not have been an accident. You can only control what you can, but if everyone read this essay, I am sure the roads would be safer.
- 06/01/2004
- 13:19:49
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have read every book by John Grisham and I am a big fan of his writing. Most of his books have been turned into movies. This essay was good until the end when you had used the word(s) dream and drempt too much. Other than that, I was glued to reading the essay. Nice job.
- 06/01/2004
- 11:13:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper took some time and research to write it. It is very informative and put together very well.
- 06/01/2004
- 11:04:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay provided many points and was written very well with quotations. I live in Florida and I agree with the FCAT testing. It doesn't matter what color you are, I think a good score comes from dedication and initiative. Once again, good essay.
- 06/01/2004
- 10:59:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Are we, as Americans, going to quit using the money in print for the simple fact that it says "In God We Trust"? I doubt it because every politician out there is greedy for this money and have no problem spending it, but they want to strike out the line "under God". Hypocritical I think!!
- 06/01/2004
- 10:49:51
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay was great and kept my attention, but I do not understand all the question marks for apostraphies?
- 06/01/2004
- 10:43:08
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper kept my attention and informed me of a lot of information. Great essay!!
- 05/01/2004
- 14:59:39
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I do not understand why the essay was graded at a 71%, but this was a superb essay. Very informative and captures the athletes as humans.
- 31/12/2003
- 07:57:57
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.