This is a very good comparison between the two characters Usher and Montresor. You use a lot of quotes, and that is good because it justifies what you are saying, and you language is also clear and coherent. Excellent essay!
- 05/01/2004
- 06:05:27
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This essay is very interesting, and the topic is certainly relevant to the world situation today. The only thing that is weird about this essay is the "answergraph" in the middle of it. Where does it come from and who are the people who have been asked? How many people have been asked (and how many of them have answered)? You really should have written something about that. Also, who is "we"? Are there several authors who wrote this essay?
- 05/01/2004
- 05:50:46
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is an interesting essay, and I think you have a point, but it is a bit hard to follow and sometimes your language is grammatically incorrect (for example, at one place you must have forgottten to use punctuation, because it does not make sense at all). Also, you should state the pagenumber after every quote you use (you only did that once, I think).
- 02/01/2004
- 08:16:15
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.