Perhaps better essay structure and format would enhance the essay. Not sure if your teacher is allowing you to use personal pronouns
- 27/01/2004
- 15:50:24
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Make sure you find all the contractions and correct them to the proper form. Make sure it's: does not... not doesn't or it is, not it's
- 06/01/2004
- 15:15:27
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Work on your stucture and grammar in the essay. Proof read it through and get peers or the teacher to read it over and analyze it. Otherwise, good facts
- 02/01/2004
- 20:45:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.