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  • Very well done

    Perhaps better essay structure and format would enhance the essay. Not sure if your teacher is allowing you to use personal pronouns
    • 27/01/2004
    • 15:50:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Don't use contractions!

    Make sure you find all the contractions and correct them to the proper form. Make sure it's: does not... not doesn't or it is, not it's
    • 06/01/2004
    • 15:15:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Watch grammar

    Work on your stucture and grammar in the essay. Proof read it through and get peers or the teacher to read it over and analyze it. Otherwise, good facts
    • 02/01/2004
    • 20:45:14
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.