For an analyzation of a poem, there isn't much apparent analyzing in the essay. Also, I believe you have slightly missed the point of "Birches." Read it over agian--It's not really about life and death.
- 26/10/2004
- 13:00:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Even though you included a lot of facts, that is all your essay was. Here are some tips on how you could improve this essay:-Beware of your pronouns. Most noticeably, "it". In the first few sentences, you use "it" without saying what "it" is referring to. You did the same thing for "this" in the first sentence.-Consider breaking this one paragraph into multiple paragraphs. Not only are multiple paragraphs easier to read, they also help you to organise your facts better.-Opening and closing sentences are missing. A good essay includes an opening sentence, a body, and a conclusion. Refer to http://ohoh.essortment.com/howtowritegoo_rgec.htm for more information.
- 06/02/2004
- 17:20:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I, too, lived in NZ and had the same thoughts. Even though it has been only 4 years since I have lived there, I miss it a little. Loved these top ten, I can relate to a lot of them.
- 05/02/2004
- 17:24:23
- Score: 16 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
Very well written and well-ordered. I did find a couple of spelling mistakes, but because the paper was so informative, I didn't care about them.
- 05/02/2004
- 17:13:38
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Having to study this poem and write an essay on it was difficult. When I discovered your essay, it opened to many things that I did not at first see. Also, the paragraphs have a nice way of flowing together, and the last paragraph wraps up your paper nicely. Good work, and thanks for submitting it.
- 20/01/2004
- 18:07:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.