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  • Good, but a thesis would be nice.

    Good paper, but you need a thesis statement (or a stronger one) which basically lays out everything you are going to talk about in the paper.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 19:00:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well I somewhat agree....

    I somewhat agree that most history teachers and history books make America out to be a flawless nation, there are some that seem to show the ups and downs of American history. But, even if all of them do try to build up as much Patriotism as possible, don't you think it is the same in other countries? Did you limit this essay to only America because you've never been taught history in another country or was it something else?
    • 20/01/2004
    • 23:46:33
    • Score: 18 out of 19 people found this comment useful.