User Details For: sandgirl1973

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  • Good outline

    Thorough outline, but this is not an essay.
    • 22/02/2004
    • 16:17:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmmm...

    A little too jumbled up and not very well organized. I had problems getting through it and I know the story quite well.
    • 31/01/2004
    • 18:45:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.