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• The Green Anole (Anolis Carolinis): Physique, mating, and needs. Small reptile care.

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• Appearances are Deceiving in Shakespeare's Macbeth. Reference quotes to the text and lines cited.

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• Mark Twain's The Adventure of Huckleberry Finn. Huck: adaptable, clever, and caring.

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  I have never heard of Jollibee. It helps a lot to introduce what you're talking about in the opening paragraph so readers have a frame of reference to what you're talking about.
  • 03/02/2004
  • 16:04:14
  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
    

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  Good information, but misuse of commas and not using commas in places they should be really pulls it down. A simple grammar and spelling check in Word would have helped you a lot.
  • 03/02/2004
  • 13:17:33
  • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.