I think..this essay needs some revising, it is good though, very hard work was put into the research of this essay-I can tell.
- 21/09/2004
- 16:08:54
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good essay, but a lil cut short, it could have been more informative and interesting, but this is still a good well written essay.
- 28/08/2004
- 14:13:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
wow!... (pause) ohmygosh (pause) what a corny story. i dont like it, it sounded waaay too played out, and it was kinda confusing even. sure it starts out good and all, but this essay is NOT worthy of being on this site. (pause) lol
- 11/08/2004
- 21:00:32
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
very informative, descriptive, advanced vocabulary; a well-rounded essay to my opinion
- 11/08/2004
- 20:50:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i would have to say, there are two things wrong with this essay. one being: unlike the author has previously said, you DO need more marijuana in order to get high as you smoke, like how you start building up a tolerance to alcohol, you need more and more beer to get drunk, the same applies to marijuana., and two marijuana should be legalized b/c it helps people in ways that the author of this essay would never know. marijuana is a good thing if used in moderation, somewhat like the author said, but not if youre a full-blown stoner. other than the two things wrong with this essay, this is a good essay, its written well, its got good info and statitics so it can be useful if this essay is put on cheathouse.
- 04/05/2004
- 20:48:12
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
obviosly, the person who graded this author's essay and gave them a 65% had a stick up theyre butt or something b/c this is a wonderful essay, and should definately be put on cheathouse this is an outstanding essay on how computers impacted this world. good job man! keep up the good work!
- 03/05/2004
- 18:40:48
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this essay, being about both pepsi and coke, it seems the author prefers coke, which he seems to talk about a whole lot more than pepsi. good essay though. very good essay...but doesnt match the subject that this author tried to fulfill this essay is very useful if you were doing research on coka-cola, but not with pepsi.
- 03/05/2004
- 18:35:27
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
very informative essay. if i was a teacher...id probably give this essay a 98/100% while informative, it is kinda boring. make it more interesting, but id say that if the right person got a hold of this essay, theyd be able to improve upon it greatly. i think this essay should be put on the site.
- 11/04/2004
- 12:48:36
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very good essay, i must say. stays on the subject throughout the entire essay, and its even got a works cited page which, i think, is a plus. good job man, i hope this essay ends up being used
- 23/03/2004
- 20:48:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this essay ain all that bad at all! it tells of feminists love and the views on it
- 17/03/2004
- 17:33:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
well, this essay was OKAY......it could be fixed up, if ya know how to do it right
- 08/03/2004
- 14:51:59
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i gota agree with this dude/dudett man. there IS more age discrimination and it IS worse on 18 and up year olds than it is on the older people. good times man. this was an alrite essay!
- 08/03/2004
- 14:45:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this essay caught my attention. it was very descriptive, informative, and interesting! i would like to see more essays written by this user. :)
- 04/03/2004
- 16:59:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay is very specific, year-wise, and thuroghly is a good essay
- 04/03/2004
- 16:54:00
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
cool man. i never thought that there was so much to when some kid sings \"liar liar pants on fire!\" like this dude (or dudett) was sayin in this essay; lying has a long history...
- 02/03/2004
- 17:23:03
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
this kid did their research, thats for sure, it IS original B/C this essay's got the URL addresses of the websites that they got the info from for this essay and rite after each paragraph even. although, this essay WAS really short, but explains its purpose very well for the amount of writing, which is to inform that the federal reserve was discussing cutting the interest rates.
- 02/03/2004
- 17:17:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
theres some typos, but people are only human, they all make mistakes, the author of this essay writes as if he/she had really changed schools and all of the things the author talks about in this essay seem to be legit to me
- 24/02/2004
- 20:29:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
it seems as though the assignment was to put an entry in a capitain's log involving specific information and facts, good times. id say this was a well thought out and researched entry thingy :P lol
- 24/02/2004
- 20:22:55
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i didnt know that there was such of a thing as TOO informative until i read this essay...its more boring..i think which makes it..TOO informative Buut thats just my opinion...i guess..
- 11/02/2004
- 19:11:37
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
id hate to say it, but i AM impressed. i actually cried reading this essay b/c i know how true it is, my dad was emotionally absent w/me and still is and im always getting in trouble and stuff like that...
- 10/02/2004
- 22:47:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i think that this was a well-thought-out essay, and i also think that it SHOULD be published, it grabs my attention from the start, i personally think that teachers would like it too ::wink wink::
- 10/02/2004
- 22:41:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.