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    the beginning was great, but there was no detail at the end. How could you write a paper on "the history of Super Mario" and not have the actually history of Super Mario? Where's all of the info about his breakthrough game, Super Mario 64? Or his other adventures on the NES, SNES, the GameBoys, then his Mario Party series, etc., etc.? Your paper starts off well, but the ending needs a total revamping.
    • 09/05/2004
    • 11:39:32
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.