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  • Very Good Info

    Wow you sure got some nice resources but where is the attention grabber that catches the readers eye. If you can make this an eye catcher the reader will be rewarded with very well researched info but it seems at first glance to be a lot of info well organised into paragraphs. I gave it a smiley face for the outstanding info you produced but think about what if you were reading it... Would you enjoy it?
    • 14/02/2004
    • 23:26:53
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • An idea

    Hey i enjoyed this essay very much but i wonder if instead telling about how You(I) everything try changing it so that your actually talking about sterotypes instead of how you feel about it. Not that your opinion isnt correct it just puts the fact in the person reading it that this is really whats going on not just what you feel on the subject. Sorry if this makes you mad im not saying its bad cuz it is very well written and i gave it a green it was just and idea if you care.
    • 14/02/2004
    • 23:22:45
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good!

    I am impressed its near perfect the only thing i can sugest is a little more character in it and you got a perfect essay right here. Really good!!!
    • 12/02/2004
    • 18:30:19
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.