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  • Ok. Showing only 1 side

    This is a one sided essay, you didn't provide any points that opposed your main point. What about the people who think he wasn't a good person? Can you prove them wrong?
    • 06/11/2006
    • 21:57:17
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    well written essay. GJ
    • 03/01/2005
    • 15:14:23
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • INTRO

    I personally think that the intro was a little 2 short. everything else was fine
    • 03/01/2005
    • 15:12:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Uh...

    i think u coulda written a little more, this is the kind of topic that u might want to show some statistic (numbers) and stuff.
    • 03/01/2005
    • 15:06:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • There were some mistakes

    YOu should read your essay after you write it.Example: "If that is doing anything for a friend, I don't know what is."i think u meant"If that isNT doing anything for a friend, I don't know what is.
    • 15/09/2004
    • 19:19:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good i guess

    It was a good essay, but the numbers..... the numbers were really confusing. U should have submited graphs instead of just putting the #s
    • 25/02/2004
    • 15:41:52
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    A lot of info.... ulcers ulcers.... i think ill go to the doctor. This essay scared me a lil. Nicely written
    • 20/02/2004
    • 19:57:46
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Opinions

    Maybe there is lack of logic but it just depends of what ur point of view is. The author is just stating his opinion.
    • 20/02/2004
    • 14:57:40
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT

    MAN u have made me a believer, i wanna b a Network & Computer Specialist when i grow up. cool easay..... by the way, are u a hacker lol
    • 19/02/2004
    • 21:55:01
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • -

    I think that it was good to add the pros and cons so that people would see the 2 sides of this issue.
    • 19/02/2004
    • 17:43:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    This was a good essay indeed, but i believe that u could make it a lot better by making a few changes in to the intro and conclusion. (use stronger words)
    • 19/02/2004
    • 17:41:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • FANTASTIC

    Its good to know that there are ppl who actually stop and think about others (ppl who smoke in this case).2 words awe-some
    • 19/02/2004
    • 17:39:09
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    I think the war was a good thing. even though a lot of American soldiers died thousands and thousands of Iraqui people were freed.
    • 18/02/2004
    • 17:20:16
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely written

    Really enjoyed reading this essay. Even though im not very religious this essay made me stop and think about christianity and buddhism. AMEN!
    • 18/02/2004
    • 17:14:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Writing skillz

    Its papers like this that could make a child decide to be a mathmatician. A lot of good information, very clear. RIGHT TO THE POINT.
    • 18/02/2004
    • 15:05:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This was a good essay but it would have been bette if it would be divided into paragraphs, this would also make it easier for the reader to see the different parts of the essay
    • 18/02/2004
    • 14:55:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    Well written, introduction clearly explains what the essay will be about. A lot of information, and it was well organized.
    • 17/02/2004
    • 21:42:04
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.