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very well written. Nice thesis statement, topic sentences and transitions- 17/02/2004
- 20:22:32
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
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it looks like apa format. but i think that your paragraphs need to be longer, and have more structure to them.- 17/02/2004
- 20:19:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.