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  • My thoughts

    very well written. Nice thesis statement, topic sentences and transitions
    • 17/02/2004
    • 20:22:32
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • My thoughts

    it looks like apa format. but i think that your paragraphs need to be longer, and have more structure to them.
    • 17/02/2004
    • 20:19:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.