I'm also doing a writeup on deception in Macbeth and the quotes were a useful reference.
- 06/06/2006
- 19:36:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Predictable, but still... a nice story.
- 27/04/2006
- 19:05:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Spectacular analysis, I only wish more could see it.
- 27/04/2006
- 19:01:25
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A simple explanation of deforestation. You could use a thesaurus next time though.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:58:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
That was an extremely confined essay. I'm not sure what the expectations were for this project where you are, but I can't honestly give a good rating to this rubbish.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:54:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You've got a great title there but a lame tie-in with the political intro.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:46:59
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
As a sophomore I definitely have similar feelings about stress. Good essay.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:43:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I meant marketing firm, not newspaper.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:17:07
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"Radio ads might not be a proper way to attract our target because there is no visual display. So, we rather go for newspaper for the next step." I'm guessing that you work at a newspaper and that engligh isn't your first language.
- 27/04/2006
- 18:15:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I'm sorry but that was terrible. You list a few concise reasons in which censorship is considered bad and good, but you were too concise and didn't expand on the subjects.
- 27/04/2006
- 17:56:42
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I liked the rationale you used, but evidence apart from deductive logic and experts was severely lacking. For instance it's interesting you suggested that books have killed more than video games, but all you gave for support was a researcher's quote. You could have used Georges Louis De Buffon's "Histoire Naturelle"; a book which described Native Americans as having reproductive organs "small and feeble." The description had a large part in spreading contentment towards native Americans in Europe.
- 27/04/2006
- 17:48:11
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Keep up the good work.Cheers!Jang
- 16/07/2004
- 16:27:18
- Score: 29 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
You always seem to see what an author intended through his writing, rather than as it is writen.
- 16/07/2004
- 16:21:49
- Score: 31 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
"It is appropriate that the poem ends with an exclamatory 'me' just as the title begins with 'My' as the Duke only cares about himself."HAHA thats pretty good... I never caught that.
- 16/07/2004
- 16:19:02
- Score: 50 out of 60 people found this comment useful.
This sounds like either;1) This is an old essay, or2) This essay is a victim of plagiarism.I have come to this conclusion because of the fact that you submitted this essay this year (2004) and yet you make no mention of XHTML (which was a recommendation of W3C in 1999).
- 16/07/2004
- 16:14:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A good finale!
- 21/06/2004
- 09:33:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You better have gotten an "A+" on that paper.
- 21/06/2004
- 09:29:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You showed much knowledge of the subject at hand.
- 21/06/2004
- 09:07:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
For a 17 year old who's native language is not english... I commend you mam!
- 21/06/2004
- 09:04:08
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
That's just a script... not an introduction to PHP.
- 21/06/2004
- 09:00:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Research was in depth.
- 26/04/2004
- 16:00:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Stephen R. Covey was soo completely vague in his 7 habits. Good job paraphrasing.
- 26/04/2004
- 15:53:13
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
"Jesus was actually raised from the dead will probably never be known."If we Christians are right then we shall know after death, or at the Rapture. If I were you I would not wait until after my death to see (HELL).
- 26/04/2004
- 15:49:02
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This should be used by all the media types to get a real feel of who hackers are. Two thumbs up :)
- 26/04/2004
- 15:35:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I never really liked the "deep" feeling that C.D. gave in his poems... But having someone paraphrase it like so is very helpful :)
- 15/04/2004
- 21:24:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
"I believe this will change the way we use the Internet for ever."Everything up to that point was informational, rather than first person.You need something more like:"This just may change the way we use the Internet forever."
- 02/04/2004
- 22:55:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
of the notes, was to give the MOST basic intro possible.
- 02/04/2004
- 22:26:12
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I found this on my hard drive from way back in 6th grade! Hope you enjoyed!!
- 30/03/2004
- 15:09:18
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.