This essay was very helpful to me when I had to write an essay about Leonardo Di Vinci. I got a lot out of your essay! You did a really good job researching all of that information on him. thanks so much!
- 03/03/2005
- 12:36:31
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This "essay" needs much work. The introduction needs to go more in depth on what hes writing about. and he also failed to cite a thesis statement.
- 12/03/2004
- 15:59:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This was a very well writen and well balenced essay. It was also a good length on the topic.
- 12/03/2004
- 15:56:27
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
perfect essay with great length and good details
- 07/03/2004
- 16:09:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I greatly enjoyed reading this essay and it states many good point on how modern day music was influenced by "the king of rock and roll"
- 01/03/2004
- 07:57:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very informative and well-written essay. Just a few minor punctuation errors that need to be corrected. Other than that, it was a very good essay.
- 26/02/2004
- 15:56:26
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This was a very well writen essay. Very informative.
- 26/02/2004
- 15:08:38
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
There seems to be a good amount of research that was put into writing the essay but it doesn't flow together. There needs to be more paragraphs and topic changes.
- 26/02/2004
- 14:57:49
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
It was an overall good essay but it needs to be a little bit more proper and formal so that the reader gets more of a professional view on things.
- 26/02/2004
- 14:52:48
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.