This is really good welldone!!!
- 29/02/2004
- 08:22:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay I learned a lot from it.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:50:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay in content and quotes etc but I felt that I really needed to hear more of your opinion to make it more personalised.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:46:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay very in-depth
- 28/02/2004
- 09:41:21
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This doesn't look anything like an essay. Maybe you could space it and put it in paragraphs but the content is good.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:38:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is great!!!
- 28/02/2004
- 09:33:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think paragraphing this could help a little but apart from that it's great.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:29:30
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good essay I'm well addicted but maybe you could and make it longer.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:27:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a great essay. Welldone!
- 28/02/2004
- 09:23:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It is a very good essay but to improve further i would suggest adding more personal responses and opinions.
- 28/02/2004
- 09:20:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.