I never knew all this until I read this essay. This person has serched out alot of useful information. Good Job!
- 16/04/2002
- 20:38:44
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
This essay gives alot of information that is clear and concise. It speaks of the topic without taking any "shortcuts"
- 16/04/2002
- 20:34:40
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You should not use "you, I, we, my, etc." in a essay. In most schools, especiually in 7th grade, this is not allowed. The essay would be alot better if there was more scientific information instead of "My Opinion"
- 16/04/2002
- 20:29:13
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well written out paper. A essay that can be understood. The essay does not stray off from the main point but goes "straight down the center"
- 16/04/2002
- 20:10:24
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This person wrote this "essay" that can be easily understood. The information is complete and tell the reader alot about this topic in just a few paragraphs.
- 15/04/2002
- 19:01:43
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.