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  • Chemistry Experiment

    Your research and data are well-detailed, but you failed to answer a vital question: WHY was diffusion faster at room temperature? Your data sufficiently documents that diffusion is faster at room temp, but does not explain WHY. Anyone who has not performed this experiment and knows nothing about chemistry would ask this very question. Otherwise, very good!
    • 23/08/2004
    • 21:15:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • "Of Mice and Men" Critical Essay

    This was an accurate portrayal of the characters; they were, indeed, suffering from loneliness. Nicely written, good detail.
    • 23/08/2004
    • 21:05:28
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Personal Essay

    I'm glad you were able to open your eyes and heart to another culture. What I'd like to know is HOW it opened you. What was the *click* that turned it all on?
    • 15/05/2004
    • 12:08:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Priestley Biography

    A good read, kept my interest. Spelling, grammar, punctuation, syntax are all excellent. (Why is it that good writers always seem to worry the most??) You're good for an "A" on this one! Well done!
    • 01/05/2004
    • 14:20:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Miners' Wives

    Very insightful essay. Spelling, grammar, syntax (present tense is so hard, but you pulled it off well) all perfect. Job well done!
    • 01/05/2004
    • 14:13:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Gender Equality

    Equality hasn't been around for years -- it's been around for centuries! Hello-o-o-o! Susan B. Anthony! Elizabeth Blackwell! Katharine Houghton! Did the article say that women do not want to be drafted in the military? I find that to be irresponsible reporting if, in fact, it did.
    • 01/05/2004
    • 13:58:32
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Pearl Harbor

    Retributions for the attack at Pearl Harbor occurred long before Hiroshima and Nagasaki - read about Midway. Pearl Harbor was complete and total devastation for the United States, and to reduce it to the sloppy phrase of Japan "messing with us" is really, really offensive.
    • 01/05/2004
    • 13:47:37
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Violence in Entertainment

    Sorry, I was not at all persuaded by your arguments. Entertainment is not restricted to the television set, which your essay would have us believe. To say that "all societies are violent" is quite a broad statement. If you investigated, you would find societies that do not know violence.
    • 01/05/2004
    • 13:36:20
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthanasia

    Was this an essay of your opinion or everyone else's? You failed to give the reader your personal opinion, which is the essense of an essay. Grammar, spelling, and syntax need plenty of work.
    • 18/04/2004
    • 13:33:33
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Self Assessment

    Good analysis and content. Be careful with stereotyping: "That is why all Indians have strong math skills."
    • 18/04/2004
    • 13:26:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    You've got me scratching my arms and legs right now! I was so caught up in your torment! AAAH!! (Verrrry well written!)
    • 16/04/2004
    • 23:50:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Legalizing Marijuana

    You can NOT compare pot to cigarettes! Tobacco is NOT the same as hemp! Your arguments for legalizing marijuana are much like everything else I've read on the subject -- not convincing. Sorry.
    • 16/04/2004
    • 23:43:18
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.