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  • Well written

    very compelling,the idea is supported with great deal of evidence.
    • 09/01/2005
    • 12:22:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Death Penalty

    Very well written, quite convincing. I have to agree with the author that death penalty is very just.
    • 18/11/2004
    • 16:11:23
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Death Penalty

    Structure is very good, a lot of evidence, however, still not quite convincing.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 22:53:11
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • What is this?

    Somebody please tell me what this is...
    • 26/07/2004
    • 18:07:46
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • ... ...

    I agree with the first guy, my writing teacher said using words/phrases such as "I/we think..." is a sign of unsophisticated writing...
    • 10/07/2004
    • 01:02:20
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • About the opening too

    i kinda agree with the last guy, your first paragraph sounds more like a "prospectus" rather than a opening of an essay, i am not saying that it is wrong, but it just don't make me feel that it is strong enough.
    • 10/07/2004
    • 00:58:39
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Job Man!

    Nice job,buddy. i m doing a research on cold war, i found this paper very interesting, cuz while everyone is writing about how terrible the influences of cold war are, you are standing at a different level, a whole new perspective, analyzing the positive aspects of this \"war\", that\'s what really makes this paper stand out!
    • 31/05/2004
    • 00:51:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Kool~~

    I am currently doing research paper on Korean War, found this paper very helpful. I also wanna learn why China got involved...
    • 05/04/2004
    • 01:16:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • I think I've seen this paper b4!

    I think I've seen this paper b4!I don't believe this is his original work, you can get this kinda thing anywhere, like sparkenotes, monkeynotes...
    • 11/03/2004
    • 23:58:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.