very compelling,the idea is supported with great deal of evidence.
- 09/01/2005
- 12:22:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well written, quite convincing. I have to agree with the author that death penalty is very just.
- 18/11/2004
- 16:11:23
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Structure is very good, a lot of evidence, however, still not quite convincing.
- 15/11/2004
- 22:53:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Somebody please tell me what this is...
- 26/07/2004
- 18:07:46
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the first guy, my writing teacher said using words/phrases such as "I/we think..." is a sign of unsophisticated writing...
- 10/07/2004
- 01:02:20
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i kinda agree with the last guy, your first paragraph sounds more like a "prospectus" rather than a opening of an essay, i am not saying that it is wrong, but it just don't make me feel that it is strong enough.
- 10/07/2004
- 00:58:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice job,buddy. i m doing a research on cold war, i found this paper very interesting, cuz while everyone is writing about how terrible the influences of cold war are, you are standing at a different level, a whole new perspective, analyzing the positive aspects of this \"war\", that\'s what really makes this paper stand out!
- 31/05/2004
- 00:51:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I am currently doing research paper on Korean War, found this paper very helpful. I also wanna learn why China got involved...
- 05/04/2004
- 01:16:04
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I think I've seen this paper b4!I don't believe this is his original work, you can get this kinda thing anywhere, like sparkenotes, monkeynotes...
- 11/03/2004
- 23:58:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.