I can't believe I found this essay here. Not only is it well thought out and apparently well researched, it is also well constructed. This is one of the best ones I've read here. Thumbs up!
- 05/04/2006
- 09:43:08
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An excellent overview of the Holocaust as a whole.
- 28/03/2006
- 20:56:55
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I can not believe this was written by a high school student. If only this were the standard for all 11th graders! Very well done. : )
- 20/01/2005
- 15:52:17
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a fantastic essay, but none of your writings are congruent. The language and grammar are very different in each. Either this is someone else's essay, or you did a lot of copy and pasting. I call plagarism.
- 20/01/2005
- 15:18:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
And this essay was accepted why? This is more of a commentary than anything. It doesn't follow any sort of classroom essay format.
- 05/12/2004
- 15:53:41
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Without having read all the poems I still embraced the theme of the three.
- 05/12/2004
- 15:32:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I certainly hope you're going to college because this is far superior to many college students' writing. AWESOME JOB.
- 24/11/2004
- 10:32:35
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a very well constructed and cited essay.
- 24/11/2004
- 10:05:16
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All you've done is summarize the story. Your title infers that you make an analysis of it.
- 24/11/2004
- 09:59:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
However, this was a somewhat typical essay on "The Story of an Hour." I was hoping for something more creative since it's filed under 'Creative Writing.' :/
- 24/11/2004
- 09:50:38
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I finally found an essay that measures up to my own on this site! VERY well done. :)
- 24/11/2004
- 09:34:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You didn't explain anything in detail. I can't believe this is doctoral level work. I can see why the professor failed you.
- 18/11/2004
- 11:58:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The content is great, but the grammar and MLA format could use some work.
- 18/11/2004
- 11:14:29
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Your use of loaded language is a bit excessive, and you beg the question a number of times, though I am not sure what the guidelines of the assignment were. Perhaps that is why the grade was so low. Otherwise, it's a very informative essay, and it explores both sides fairly well.
- 04/11/2004
- 06:43:03
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.