This is a very weak essay topic. The sentence structures could use some fixing.
- 29/11/2004
- 14:11:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very well written. Supreme effort.
- 29/11/2004
- 14:09:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The works of Alice Sebold are filled with despair and they deal with very difficult issues. You did a good job portraying this.
- 29/11/2004
- 14:02:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I found this essay very interesting and informative. Good job!
- 29/11/2004
- 14:00:05
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You have gathered some very interesting information on Jung. I enjoyed reading this!
- 29/11/2004
- 13:58:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay was very well written. You have gathered some interesting information that is clearly expressed. The only thing I would change is your introduction. If you had a better lead, it would add more strength to your essay. Other than that, good effort.
- 29/11/2004
- 13:53:40
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I am currently writing an essay on the theme of power and control in The Handmaid's Tale, and I found this essay quite helpful. However, I think it would be better if the writer used quotes to back up some of the statements and examples in this essay. Other than that, good job!
- 31/10/2004
- 07:59:52
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.