Pretty nice. The punctuation and grammar could use a double check, but cleaned up it would be quite good.Sentences such as \"Robyn says early on that neither side is right and that both are wrong and she doesn\'t want to kill but she has been forced too,\" could use quite a bit of work, but over all, it\'s hella good. I\'d use it anyday.Very nice essay. Lots of good quotes. Oh yeah, teachers LOVE those. I\'d make the quotes in italics though.
- 07/03/2004
- 19:43:45
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