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  • Commenting on essay

    +This essay is informative. The thing I liked the most about this essay is the length. It could actually be used for something important. If you do a report on A.I. this could help a lot.
    • 19/04/2002
    • 21:26:04
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Commenting

    This essay is actually pretty good. It makes me want to read the book. One thing I did notice is that at the end of the 6th paragraph the word "The" is tacked on where it should be at the beginning of the 7th paragraph. Other than that I like this essay
    • 18/04/2002
    • 16:29:44
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Commenting

    Though this is an appropriate review, it can't really be considered an essay. It isn't long enough and I don't know how many essays people are going to have to do about movie reviews. I spotted a few grammatical errors. Other than this it is an ok review.
    • 17/04/2002
    • 22:32:08
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Commenting

    This essay is extremely short and could not be used for many things. I like the idea of the author using her mother as her role model,(I have written one for my father) but it doesnt tell enough detail. What is the internship? Why does the internship even relate to a role model? Do you plan on being a role model to someone aftr the internship? These questions go unanswered. If only it were a little longer and the author put a little more time into this it could have been great.
    • 17/04/2002
    • 16:46:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Comments

    At the beginning of this essay the author submits facts that seem to say that older people are not discriminated against. Later on I found out what the author was trying to convey to the reader. I really like that facts were stated and not opinions. I would use this report only slightly modified if I had to do a report on elderly discrimination.
    • 16/04/2002
    • 21:35:28
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Martin Luther King

    I noticed that there were a few mispelled woords. There were a few grammer errors where the author forgot to add ed to make his words past tense. Looking beyond these few errors, this essay was informative and although I don't know much about King what I do know was concurrent with this essay.
    • 16/04/2002
    • 21:24:55
    • Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.